Date: June 14, 2008 07:55 am Title: Chapter 4
Nice job on this chapter. Brought back some memories of wanting to kill a certain brother -in-law and a stupid cake lady! I love Michael's present! Priceless!
Date: June 14, 2008 03:41 am Title: Chapter 2
“How long have you been planning to grow a village in my abdomen?”
Hee hee hee - that's totally the same way I feel about having children.
Date: June 13, 2008 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was the best yet! It just flowed incredibly well and was perfect! You really know how to capture this story! Great job! Really!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
ahh i love drunk!wedding jim :-)
plus steam and michael being an idiot = a kevin style "niiiiice"
Date: June 06, 2008 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awesome chapter, yet AGAIN! I really enjoyed it just as I have with the other chapters; if not even more. Keep adding more! You're doing spectacular!
10 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Squee I adore baby talk! Please update soon, I'm begging you! Sigh, why couldn't I have come from that village...well, I guess that wouldn't work because then I'd have the hots for my dad, but you get my point ;P. Darn it, I went on a tangent again. But please update, I love this!
Date: May 29, 2008 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
“How long have you been planning to grow a village in my abdomen?”
Ha! Ha! I'm still laughing at this line. Really cute!
8 [Report This]Date: May 29, 2008 07:12 am Title: Chapter 2
“How long have you known that?”
“How long have you been planning to grow a village in my abdomen?”
“Well played.”
Too funny : ) Nice job!
9 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww how sweet. I love that her way of dealing with an uncomfortable situation like that is to drink. Very reminiscent of The Dundies. It was also very natural how the conversation flowed from angry to happy; you can tell they're really responsive to each other and know exactly what to say to make the other one feel better. Awesome chapter! More please!
Date: May 28, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is adorable! You really stay in character well :)
Date: April 09, 2008 08:27 am Title: Chapter 1
i love this. a few grammer errors that a quick read over might fix, but i love the content.
drunk jim is one of my favorite things to read b/c he's always so sweet and professing his love to pam. i love here how he gets mad at her though. too cute. ok. so i love it. i think i can stop now.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
That gave me butterflies...but Jim didn't rub my tummy!!!
Date: April 08, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love proposals! good chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so beautiful! My heart is seriously melting. I've always liked understated proposals--I think they're a lot more genuine, intimate, and romantic than the big gestures, because they're completely simple and personal. I really think it fits them as a couple, too, since they're both very "down-home" characters. I also liked that they could talk honestly about his drunken confession, since they are and always were best friends. So yeah, I liked it all--can't wait for more!
Date: April 08, 2008 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE THIS! I love Drunk!Jim and I hope we get to see something like this soon :) Great job!
Date: April 08, 2008 02:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. I like where you started and can't wait for the next chapter! Jim's mom hates Pam? hmmmm.....any particular reason why? Please update soon so I can find out!
Date: April 08, 2008 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God I love this! First, jim is an adorable drunk! Second, did I mention I love this?! What a fantastic way to go about a moment we've all dreamed of for Jim and Pam. I really really liked this premise and how well you captured each of the characters! Can't wait for the next bit
8 [Report This]Date: April 08, 2008 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really liking this so far and interested to see where you take it.
His hand moved away from hers and started to rub small circles on her stomach as if he could read her mind when she thought about her butterflies. Great line.
Date: April 08, 2008 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic. I loved it! You did a great job and I'm looking forward to the next bit. You're doing a great job portraying these characters! Keep it up! : )