Reviews For Wednesday at Dusk
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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2009 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

perfect. i won't ruin it's perfectionism by trying to dissect it's perfect-ness, so i'll just leave it al that.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2008 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my gods.  I'm not a squeer but...there is not enough SQUEE in the whole world!  I thought that one month was perfect but.  But just.  Tomorrow!  I love that!  It's so perfect and so perfectly them.

Reviewer: aabchamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2008 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story where you manage to combine classic Jim/Pam banter with the fascination and emotion that occurs when you experience something new and wonderful.

"Yeah....I..." she got a bit choked up and he pulled her close, his mouth finding hers again. A few moments passed, more kisses and hands smoothing along sheet softened skin.

It's decriptions like these that remind me why I love to read. Perfection. *sigh*

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2008 05:18 am Title: Chapter 1

Of course, it's a Wednesday because if they're going to get married "tomorrow" that's a THURSDAY and we'll all get to see it!  This really came out so lperfectly, my friend.  So glad to see it and so glad to read your note-perfect touch with these two again.  Are we all the way back?  Yes, I think we are!

Reviewer: honeypioneer Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love how everything is so ordinarily perfect in this. Simple, but beautiful :)

Reviewer: iheartcreed Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

That Wednesday just kicked my ass too!! Very well written story, love that they're so happy they really are only getting out fragmented sentences, but are still on the same page as one another. And that paragraph that starts "And today was just a Wednesday..."? Wow, golden. Gave me chills it was so good. Short and simple, but perfectly characterizes they're relationship and is so touching. Well done!

Reviewer: BlueBustyGal Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

They are soooooo going to elope! I love this in the bed decision. Eloping ins most definitely a decision made in bed. 

Reviewer: Whichoneispam08 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Your stories make my heart warm! You do their voices so well.

"You have to tell me now...I'm your fiancée."

I want this to be a line on the show! ...Maybe even the engagement reveal.

Reviewer: Sharipep Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOOOOVED IT! but i love everything you do.:)

Reviewer: Catie9 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ha! You made me smile like a crazed maniac at work today, which is totally awesome since it was the longest day in the history of all the days. Seriously, you know I love all your stuff and this is no exception. Just so in character and SO how I want things to go down (TWSS)...Awesome!

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL! I love how Pam just kicked his ass right back. Great job!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Those last few lines are so perfect. This is a sweet story, thanks for sharing it with us!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think it was so terribly sad the way you captured Pam's thought that engagement doesn't necessarily mean wedding...oh Roy, what did you do to her??

loved it loved it. :o) 

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 10:52 am Title: Chapter 1

Never has the phrase about kicking ass made me SO happy!
But could you please own just a teeny bit of TO? It would make sure there was no more angst, just happy JAM. Just a bit. Just the JAM part.

Wow. The first sentence. I am so happy. I can't really stop smiling. Like :D :D! Engaged! (I am scaring people now!)

Kissing her nose! So cute. God, this is so happy!

She has the ring. I thouht that Jim having the ring was the instant happy pill, but just thinking of Pam having the ring makes it so much more awesome. (take that as an entire i love this line that line for like... well, the entire story)

"Just imagining it all made her obscenely happy." It makes me obscenely happy also, and I am not even like.... them!

""To tell you again about how quickly stalkers buy engagement rings for their victims?"" Perfect line!

I can't stop smiling. Seriously. I love this!

He wants to marry her. As soon as they can. Of course. Because its Jim. And she is Pam. And they are meant for each other.

Getting married TOMORROw.
The smile broke my face.

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 09:58 am Title: Chapter 1

This was just so beyond perfect. The epitome of everything a one-shot should be. Kinda leaves you wanting more, but you know that should be it.

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 09:28 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw!!! So romantic and great! I want a Jim :-( lol ok no seriously though, I especially loved the way you described her being overwhelmed by him kind of, when he says a month.  So wonderful.  And btw I feel like looking at the ring up against all those different fabrics would be exactly what I would do.  I also loved that you didn't really describe HOW he kicked her ass, we just know he did.  Very cool.  Well done I love love love this. ::favorited::

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:24 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, how sweet. Of course you are the master of dialogue - sometimes I wonder if you really are one of the show's writers masquerading as a fanfiction writer. :-P

But seriously this was really nice. I especially loved this part:

He was laughing. "I don't think I understand your question...I....Yeah...Pam, I wouldn't have asked you to marry me if I wasn't actually ready to get married."

And that was it.

So true. I am so happy for Pam knowing that she has a guy who actually wants to marry her this time. Sigh. Thanks for sharing, as always! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1

Yay, Lovefool's talents extend beyond the Baby!Fic!  I cannot wait for there to be some variation of this scenario. 

The very essence of the differences between Jim & Roy:  "I wouldn't have asked you to marry me if I wasn't actually ready to get married."


And this is another favorite: Indeed just an ordinary kind of Wednesday that had mercifully decided to go ahead and kick her ass.  I'll drink to that!!

Reviewer: JamFan4000 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1

Hell, yea! You nailed it with the part about Jim ready to marry now, like tomorrow-'cuz he wouldn't have asked if he wasn't serious, Duh... And Pam is slow on the uptake of how committed Jim has ALWAYS been. God, that girl kills me. During Chair Model when Jim walked away from her desk, she smiled and then looked like "OMG, what the hell just happened!" sorry, JAM rambling here......

Reviewer: JamFan4000 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Hell, yea! You nailed it with the part about Jim ready to marry now, like tomorrow-'cuz he wouldn't have asked if he wasn't serious, Duh... And Pam is slow on the uptake of how committed Jim has ALWAYS been. God, that girl kills me. During Chair Model when Jim walked away from her desk, she smiled and then looked like "OMG, what the hell just happened!" sorry, JAM rambling here......

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1

"To tell you again about how quickly stalkers buy engagement rings for their victims?"  Fantastic.  So sweet and simple and earnest.  You're putting all these wonderfully fanciful ideas in my head, LoveFool : )

 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 05:02 am Title: Chapter 1

"by court order" made me laugh out loud (which is dangerous, because it's early here, and I'm supposed to be making breakfast for my wife who isn't awake yet. :D). 

I love this little flight of fancy here. So many emotions running around, the laughter, the joy, the anxiety... the eventual clarity. It's a really nice mix of them all.

And you managed to get Jim's mindset correct with regard to his proposing. I was in the same boat when I popped the question to Mrs. Mose. We both knew it was going to happen, and we both knew what her answer would be. But still, it was a transcendent moment, a moment when my entire universe stopped and stood still for those few eternally long seconds that last in between heartbeats and laze about in between breaths until she said "yes." :D

After that, it really was easy. I'd have married her the next day as well, if I could have. (As it turned out, it was less than four months later, so, not bad.)

Great work!

Reviewer: pokey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 12:44 am Title: Chapter 1

Love it. Funny but deep.

Reviewer: Tiktaalik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2008 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1

As someone who recently got engaged herself, can I just take a minute to tell you that this is EXACTLY what it's like? I was distracted by the sparkly thing on my finger for WEEKS afterward. I almost got into a wreck in my car because I was admiring it in the later afternoon sunlight. :)

And the thing with Jim being ready to get married right away is pretty nice, too, cause that's how a lot of guys are when they propose - for them, the hardest part is done and they are ready to get hitched, like, NOW. And I love Pam at the end.

Very nice, very sweet story. I loved it!

Reviewer: Kate Shepherd Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2008 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Watch me grin like a fool for the next half hour. Thanks for that nugget of sunshine!

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