Date: May 11, 2008 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
“I know.” He leaned over the gearshift and kissed me, palming my cheek in his big hand. “I have a plan, Beesly, and it is considerably more sophisticated than…this,” he gestured to our surroundings, and suddenly grinned. “Clowns and ponies?”
^i just got a really cute image in my mind when I read this.
Author's Response: :D Well, that's the idea! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: May 07, 2008 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh that end part with Mr. Langely was so funny. I'm loving this! Reading on...
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Date: May 07, 2008 03:04 am Title: Chapter 2
This is the chapter that really sold this story for me! I can completely imagine Jim in this scenario after the talk from Ryan. He's never cared about his job, but now he's got "plans." Love. it.
Date: May 04, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
i like it - i can totally see this happening (chapter 2). can't wait for more!
Date: May 04, 2008 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love how you integrated Did I Stutter into your story! I hope Jim gets a move on!
Date: May 04, 2008 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Jim and his PLAN! He'd better get to it, we are all getting impatient!!!
Loved reliving parts of DIS. Some parts more than others. And the little glimpse into their lives outside the office -- pure magic. I love that Pam is picking on Jim about it -- very true to character.
Date: May 04, 2008 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was so good, we get fluff, Michael drama, and a darker/worried side of Jim. Love it!!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2008 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
Callisto, I am really loving your stories. I was happily surprised to find them! I really like how you work the episode in and then add more detail, even in the midst of what happened in the ep. You also do Jim and Pam's characters quite well - their dialogue seems very true to canon. And I like how you're telling this from Pam's POV. Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was really worried that I took too much out of the episode so I'm very glad to hear it worked. I think I'm almost done with Ch. 3...just depends on if I want there to be 4 or not. will be updating soon...
10 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2008 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! workin' on it.
10 [Report This]Date: May 04, 2008 10:04 am Title: Chapter 2
Callisto, you rock my world : ) This? This was awesome. So believable, warm, funny. “You said divorce,” he said happily. So clever.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wondered about that line...nice to know it came across as I intended. I really was going to have him just propose in the car...but now I'm really glad I didn't.
Date: May 04, 2008 09:40 am Title: Chapter 2
adorable.
thanks for this. i missed the episode the other night. now i feel all caught up.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not sure I did the whole episode justice...there was a lot with the other folks in the office and you MUST watch the whole thing, if only for Dwight's Mad Lib and chain-of-command chart.
Date: May 03, 2008 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really adore this. This chapter really sucked me in. I think you captured what must've been their feelings at the end of this day, in a very real way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Working on it...
10 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2008 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aaaaand I was totally psyched out there - I thought for sure Jim was going to propose in the car. Very well done, I love this story.
Author's Response: Yay! That was exactly my intention, I'm glad it worked. Thanks for reading :)
9 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2008 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is lovely, callisto! I'm really enjoying it, and the way you tied in and expanded the last episode was a real treat. Keep it up! -CH
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: May 03, 2008 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
i can't get enough of this story! i get so sad when i get to the end because i know there's not another chapter. i love how you keep it so close to the show. and i love your writing :] update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was actually not very happy with this initially because i don't like taking too much straight from the episodes, so I'm glad to hear it worked. Working on ch. 3...
Date: May 03, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I'm hanging on to this story as much as I'm hanging on to see what Jim will do!
I hope you are going to let us in on what you have planned for Jim to have planned!
Author's Response: That's the plan...just as soon as I figure it out myself! Thanks for reading :)