10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2008 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. sweet. a possible wumpage fic in office fanfiction? didnt know it could be done but its actually really good. a bit oc but theres no other way to get a plot like that. and anyway toby could very possibly be crazy like that. yay im excited for this!
Author's Response: Thank you. But what is a wumpage? I'm glad that you didn't think it could be done, because I love defying writing limitations. I think you're right with the OC part, and the fact there's on other way to get a plot like this. I'm trying to make it as in character as possible, but I think that with this type of story, you almost have to have the characters OC in order to make it work and not boring. And yes, Toby is crazy. Have you seen Season 4? I used to like him and feel sorry for him, but now he's creepy.
10 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHHH!
You rock my world with your writing.
And yet, you shatter it at the same time with all this angst!
I love the idea that Dwight would go all Private Investigator on this situation. ;)
And I love even more the idea that thoughts of Pam would keep Jim alive! Awww! *heart melts*
Toby is such a creep... Ugh.
Please write more as fast as you can!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the angst. To be honest, I was worried about what people would think if I didn't have a lot of action and Toby hurting in this chapter, but I felt that I needed to show how Jim and Pam would react in this situation. They need each other, and that's the reason that Jim is staying alive now that he's captured. And yes, I thought only Dwight would be able to help Pam. He's going to help her somemore, and I've got a hilerious scene with him in the next couple of chapters. I don't want to say anymore, but I'm already planning on how to write it. And finally, yes, Toby is a creep, and I can't say more without ruining the story. Wow this is a long review. I blame you JamFan4! (Keep them coming.)
9 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2008 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Not gunna lie, at first I was skeptical, but I do like the style of this. It's incredibly different from everything else on this site, but in a good way. Can't wait till the next update
Author's Response: I love it when I get someone who's skeptical and then I manage to chance their minds. You're right, it is a bit different, but I think that's a bit of fresh air. I'll try to update soon.
Date: May 10, 2008 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is exciting. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I'll try to update soon!
7 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Really powerful. Keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's really a compliment to have a piece be so moving that someone thinks it's powerful. And I'm not going to promise anything, but I hope to have the second chapter up in a few days.
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I totally agree with your Authors' Note. I love the comedy and romance of the office, but every so often I need adventure and some drama. There really aren't many stories like this. I'm excited for more!! (Lol, for a second I was confused as to how 27 Dresses fit into your discription.)
This is a great start. Toby seems super crazy. I can't wait to see Jim fight his way back to Pam. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Jim and Pam fighting their way back to each other is my favorite part of the whole story. Unfortantly, Toby has the upper hand right now.
Date: May 06, 2008 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Angry as 'The irony!' and 'Toby hurting Jim and Pam'
Author's Response: Great! (Or, not great that you're angry but- you know what I mean!)If you're angry now though, just wait for the next couple of chapters!
Date: May 06, 2008 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh no!
Ok, I'm very excited for this story, but I bet it will make me very angry
Author's Response: Angry as in 'Toby hurting Jim and Pam angry' or 'Toby really isn't this evil! (Although you'll never convince me.) angry'?rnrnI'm glad you're excited though.
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh, I like, I like. You are right about the action thing. I love how you've portrayed Toby as the most evil person alive. xD
DON'T LISTEN TO THE NOTE, PAM! JIM LOVES YOU!!!
I must find out what happens! Please write more!
Author's Response: While we all know that Jim loves Pam, it's going to take a little more than us to convince her. Don't worry, I plan on having Fancy New Beesly get in there in a bit!rnrnAnd yeah, don't you just love Toby? I was reading a forum dedicated to hating him, and I thought 'This site is going to go crazy, a story that actully confirms what they've been thinking!'
Date: May 06, 2008 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
It has promise ... let's see where this goes, shall we?? Keep it coming!
Author's Response: My first reviewer! Thanks for reviewing this story, and I hope you like it!