10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2008 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. sweet. a possible wumpage fic in office fanfiction? didnt know it could be done but its actually really good. a bit oc but theres no other way to get a plot like that. and anyway toby could very possibly be crazy like that. yay im excited for this!
Author's Response: Thank you. But what is a wumpage? I'm glad that you didn't think it could be done, because I love defying writing limitations. I think you're right with the OC part, and the fact there's on other way to get a plot like this. I'm trying to make it as in character as possible, but I think that with this type of story, you almost have to have the characters OC in order to make it work and not boring. And yes, Toby is crazy. Have you seen Season 4? I used to like him and feel sorry for him, but now he's creepy.
7 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Really powerful. Keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's really a compliment to have a piece be so moving that someone thinks it's powerful. And I'm not going to promise anything, but I hope to have the second chapter up in a few days.
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
I totally agree with your Authors' Note. I love the comedy and romance of the office, but every so often I need adventure and some drama. There really aren't many stories like this. I'm excited for more!! (Lol, for a second I was confused as to how 27 Dresses fit into your discription.)
This is a great start. Toby seems super crazy. I can't wait to see Jim fight his way back to Pam. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Jim and Pam fighting their way back to each other is my favorite part of the whole story. Unfortantly, Toby has the upper hand right now.
Date: May 06, 2008 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Angry as 'The irony!' and 'Toby hurting Jim and Pam'
Author's Response: Great! (Or, not great that you're angry but- you know what I mean!)If you're angry now though, just wait for the next couple of chapters!
Date: May 06, 2008 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh no!
Ok, I'm very excited for this story, but I bet it will make me very angry
Author's Response: Angry as in 'Toby hurting Jim and Pam angry' or 'Toby really isn't this evil! (Although you'll never convince me.) angry'?rnrnI'm glad you're excited though.
10 [Report This]Date: May 06, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh, I like, I like. You are right about the action thing. I love how you've portrayed Toby as the most evil person alive. xD
DON'T LISTEN TO THE NOTE, PAM! JIM LOVES YOU!!!
I must find out what happens! Please write more!
Author's Response: While we all know that Jim loves Pam, it's going to take a little more than us to convince her. Don't worry, I plan on having Fancy New Beesly get in there in a bit!rnrnAnd yeah, don't you just love Toby? I was reading a forum dedicated to hating him, and I thought 'This site is going to go crazy, a story that actully confirms what they've been thinking!'
Date: May 06, 2008 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
It has promise ... let's see where this goes, shall we?? Keep it coming!
Author's Response: My first reviewer! Thanks for reviewing this story, and I hope you like it!