10 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHHH!
You rock my world with your writing.
And yet, you shatter it at the same time with all this angst!
I love the idea that Dwight would go all Private Investigator on this situation. ;)
And I love even more the idea that thoughts of Pam would keep Jim alive! Awww! *heart melts*
Toby is such a creep... Ugh.
Please write more as fast as you can!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the angst. To be honest, I was worried about what people would think if I didn't have a lot of action and Toby hurting in this chapter, but I felt that I needed to show how Jim and Pam would react in this situation. They need each other, and that's the reason that Jim is staying alive now that he's captured. And yes, I thought only Dwight would be able to help Pam. He's going to help her somemore, and I've got a hilerious scene with him in the next couple of chapters. I don't want to say anymore, but I'm already planning on how to write it. And finally, yes, Toby is a creep, and I can't say more without ruining the story. Wow this is a long review. I blame you JamFan4! (Keep them coming.)
9 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2008 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Not gunna lie, at first I was skeptical, but I do like the style of this. It's incredibly different from everything else on this site, but in a good way. Can't wait till the next update
Author's Response: I love it when I get someone who's skeptical and then I manage to chance their minds. You're right, it is a bit different, but I think that's a bit of fresh air. I'll try to update soon.
Date: May 10, 2008 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow this is exciting. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, and I'll try to update soon!