1 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2019 02:29 pm Title: Cheese on Toast
I love this. It does a great job of making up for the fact outlined in the title.
1 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2018 11:43 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Sigh. I love how it really happened but I love this, too. And much like Jim and Pam-- as much as I think I've gotten over them, it doesn't take much to suck me right back in. It was fun to read this to revisit those feelings. Cheers!
Date: July 22, 2009 12:52 pm Title: Cheese on Toast
This is so incredibly lovely. I like the "real" way it all happened, too, but this is just incredibly sweet.
Date: July 23, 2008 08:56 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Awww, sniff. I actually like the way that they brought up the roof as their "special place" and that they both kept it sacred. It was a nice conversation to have before the actual engagement.
Author's Response: This is one of those chapters were I knew *kinda* where it was going, but the actual events didn't play out until I started typing. I do like to think that SWSNBN never stepped one pant-suited foot up there. :-) Thanks for reviewing - as usual. I do appreciate it!!
Date: July 12, 2008 05:44 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Really, really nice finish to this story, Mox. It was very clever how you weaved the whole "being engaged to make someone else jealous" lines in there, and I loved reading more background story on the roof being "their place", and that they both avoided going up there when they were estranged from each other. And the proposal, simple, heartfelt, very much "them".
We'll see in September how Greg the sadist decides to solve the engagement issue. But a flashback to a proposal on the roof, even filmed from a discreet distance, would be perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks, EH - It always makes me very happy to know that I've satisfied the hardcore (as it were!)
Date: July 12, 2008 04:27 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Greg Daniels...saint or sinner? You know, given the importance of the rooftop of lurve in fanfic, I think in the last episode of the show, it's bound to be the scene of Jim and Pam's abduction by aliens in the final episode (so they can populate a planet in a galaxy far away. Yes, I'm Dwight.) Glad you finished this - it left me smiling, and I'm not in a particularly good mood. ;-)
Author's Response:
funny you should mention that.... I do have a fanfic crossover brewing that involves Doctor Who showing up and offering (nearly) that very same option...
Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: July 11, 2008 07:56 pm Title: Cheese on Toast
YES! [/Pam -- followed by running across the room and jumping on Jim]
Rooftop of lurve and cheesy sandwiches and cheesy pizza is the perfect place. I'm going to pretend this is the mystery flashback they are going to show us in the season premiere.
BTW -- that was a long 9 minutes. You're lucky it was worth the wait.
Author's Response:
ha - kinda like how long the end of GT to the start of S5 feels, hmm?
And if the mystery flashback is anything like this, I'll send Greg a Thank You card.
Thanks for reviewing!!!!
Date: July 11, 2008 02:52 pm Title: Cheese on Toast
:'( that's what this chapter made me do so beautiful....
Author's Response: Awww..thanks so much, Iheartstanley! I appreciate you taking the time to review. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 01:50 pm Title: Cheese on Toast
Greg Daniels may be a sadist, but you sure got even with him! I loved your proposal scenario and everything you wrote about the roof being "their place". Your story will keep me satisfied and smiling for a while..at least until I re-watch the end of Goodbye Toby again. Grrrr. Well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, Abigail. I certainly hope S5 starts on a happier note than S4 seemed to end. Yay for the rooftop! :-) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 11, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Cheese on Toast
Well what a surprise! LOL Good to have you back! Great as usual. I hope you'll be writing more often, I look forward to it.
B
Author's Response: Thank you - and yes, I'm going to try and get some of those backlogged stories caught up. So stay tuned. (Same Bat Time! Same Bat Channel!) :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 11:39 am Title: Cheese on Toast
How did I not leave a review for the first chapter? Sometimes I get confused between reviews and emails. Anyhow, I love this. I love that Jim didn't take what's her name up to the roof ;) But mostly I love that this is what I hope happened after Goodbye, Toby aired. Here's hoping we see them engaged at the start of season 5. I don't need to see the proposal, I just want to know it happened. :) Awesome job, once again.
Author's Response: Emails work as good as reviews in my book, so don't worry about it! And yes, as long as they are really engaged by the start of s5, I'll be disappointed I missed it, but happy it happened.
Date: July 11, 2008 11:33 am Title: Cheese on Toast
LOVE IT! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Jenn!
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 10:51 am Title: Cheese on Toast
*sigh*
Oh, Moxie. Was it worth the wait, you ask? Yes. Yes it was.
This was so sweet, and natural. Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks, ISB - it had been so long since I posted the first chapter that I was afraid people wouldn't even remember the story. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: July 11, 2008 10:19 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Yay! I'm really hoping that you have read Greg's mind on this one.
This was beautiful, moxie. Thanks for giving us Chapter 2.
Author's Response: You're welcome, beeswax! So glad you liked it. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 09:56 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Moxie, this is marvelous. Thank you so much for adding another installment. The dialog is pitch-perfect Jim and Pam through and through. Please don't stay away for so long next time.
Author's Response: What kind remarks - thank you, Talkative - it's very appreciated!! I hope I can get back into the routine of writing more again, soon too. :-)
9 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2008 09:23 am Title: Cheese on Toast
Nice going, Moxie! So sweet and simple.
Kudos on moving AND finishing this story! You are woman, hear you roar!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Nan - it's nice to have some time to think and write again. :-)
Date: July 11, 2008 09:23 am Title: Cheese on Toast
YAY!!!!! I was going through withdraw from MoxieFics!!
Author's Response: Awww, thanks, DS - *blush* - I'm heartened to know my absence was noted. Thanks for reviewing!!