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Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06, 2017 05:34 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Oh you capture sad, exhausted Jim so well!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 07:35 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Perfect.  I am going to be so sad to see this one end.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: absolutelyido Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 07:29 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

i am in love with this story.  awesome job!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 03:36 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

You made my day coming home and finding another update.  It was a good one too.  Thanks!

Author's Response: I try. Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 12:43 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Very nice chapter. Although I got two chapter updates in a row and was very excited to read two chapters and almost cried when I saw it was just one. Love the story! You really know how to keep people invested!

Author's Response: There was a mistake the first time I posted the chapter. For some reason it cut off halfway through Pam's big speech, so I obviously had to fix that problem. Hopefully the ending will make up for it. :)

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 02:49 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Beautiful. I'm speechless, and anticipating Jim's sick day!

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 01:28 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Thank God for Abby.  I think she finally got through Jims thick head.  Thanks for for quick updates.

Author's Response: Jim needs more than one person to kick him into gear.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 03:59 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

You are really quick with the updates.  I love it.  I don't know how much more I can take though of Jim being so sad.

Author's Response: He'll smile at some point. Eventually.

Reviewer: Kestrel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 01:34 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

I ended up liking this so much more than I ever expected to. It was well written, and the characters were fleshed out well. I especially loved that you cut back on overt drama, opting instead for the steady tension in the background - it made it more honest.

Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 09:43 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Wow. Great couple of chapters added since I last checked.  I'm not even suspicious of the Abby/Karen character. Should I be?  You wrote her very well. She's very likeable. 

Author's Response: She's not a threat. Jim and Pam themselves are obstacle enough.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 07:25 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Now you went and broke my heart.  Run Pam Now!

Author's Response: I'm just breaking hearts all over the place with these last two chapters. I will hopefully repair them.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 08:21 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

I really feel for both of them.  It's so heartbreaking.  Someone is going to have to crack and spill their guts soon.

Author's Response: The cracking will happen, guts shall be spilled. They just need to get over themselves first.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 12:18 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Wow, I miss an update somehow.  Thanks for getting them out so fast.  This story has quickly become my favorite.  I feel for both of them.

Author's Response: Timely updates are always a good thing. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Ellie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 08:07 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

I haven't reviewed this story in a while... But it's not because I don't love it, there have just been so many updates! And that is a very good thing. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Updates are indeed good and I'm glad you like them. :)

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 02:34 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Another fast update!  That was a great chapter.  I am really loving Maddie.  She is one smart cookie!

Author's Response: It seems like everyone but Jim and Pam knows what's going on. They're slow, like Kevin. :b

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 07:19 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

I'm getting anxious for some serious talking.  I think it's time for them to get into it!

Author's Response: They'll get to it, don't worry. :)

Reviewer: BrosBeforeHoes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 09:32 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Gah! I read all 16 chapters at once and got left hanging in the angst! I have to tell you the "masta" beta part made me guffaw out loud, really loud. Thanks for the belly laugh!

Author's Response: I wish I could say that Masta the beta fish was purely fictional, but it is not. There was a real life Masta (not my fish, thankfully. My fish's name was Rupert.) It always made me chuckle.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2008 09:22 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

so I've been seeing this on the recent page for a while and finally decided to read it. I love it! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: andromeda Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2008 07:00 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Wow! I can't wait for the next next letter (chapter). :)

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 02:22 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Aww, the end is adorable!
LOVE the Michael in this. That is probably the most real Michael that I have read on this whole site. Amazing job! I am reading on...

Author's Response: Thank you! Wow. I'm glad people are enjoying my Michael. He was incredibly fun to write.

Reviewer: VelvetMorning Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 12:53 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

He sniffled. "I'll miss her so much. Pam was more than a receptionist to me. She was also my assistant. The office has lost its heart and the ample bosom that covered the heart. Maybe also the lungs. I'm not really sure where the lungs are. Definitely not the appendix, because that's useless. We still have the appendix - Toby. Useless and full of poison, waiting to explode and kill your happiness. 

I loled.  A lot. 



Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad. I won't lie - I had a lot of fun writing Michael here. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2008 04:34 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Don't you dare give up on this story. It has all the makings of a great fanfic.  You have Michael down to a tee. T? Tea? Whatever, you write him well. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks! Michael is always a challenge and I have to really think about his "voice," so I'm glad to hear you think I have him down to a tee/T/tea. :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: RomanCandle Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2008 11:11 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

This reminds me of the British version, where Dawn and Lee moved to Florida. Good job so far.

Author's Response: I didn't even think of that. Now that I realize it I feel a little silly haha. Anyway, thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: jinx Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2008 07:45 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend

Can't wait to see where you take us with this.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) Hopefully you'll enjoy the ride.

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