Date: April 06, 2017 05:37 pm Title: everything that keeps me together is falling apart
And there's awkward, goofy Michael. I'm loving this-- totally has the tone of an episode.
Date: May 27, 2008 07:57 pm Title: everything that keeps me together is falling apart
I am so sad for Jim, but I do like this story. Very good!
Author's Response: I feel bad for roughing him up. I'm glad you like it, thanks for reviewing. :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 02:37 pm Title: everything that keeps me together is falling apart
Even better than the first chapter! As another reviewer said, you have Michael down to a tee/T/tea. Actually, you made every character believeable. He'd never admit it out loud, but I think Jim misses Pam's laughter, heart, and ample bosom even more than Michael.
Author's Response: I'm really glad people are enjoying Michael. He's always a challenge. I'm glad you like the characterization too. That's the one thing I really try to get right, especially with Jim and Pam.
Date: May 27, 2008 02:25 pm Title: everything that keeps me together is falling apart
Cannot wait for more! Write, write, write!
Author's Response: My muse seems to be sticking around, so updates should be regular. Glad you're liking it so far. :)