Date: June 06, 2008 01:46 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Aww, fluff, fluff, fluff, the world runs on fluff!
a. I love All I Want is You
b. What is the first scene from Jaws?
c. Maddie had good taste. ;]
Author's Response: To answer B: In the first scene of Jaws, two people go skinny dipping in the ocean and one of them is eaten by a shark. So... not fun.
Date: June 04, 2008 09:27 pm Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
ha! Pam Anderson I have never thought about that
Author's Response: I can't see Pam as a Pam Anderson. Does not compute.
9 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 06:49 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Love the part of her not taking his name. Didn't see that coming but a nice detail.
Author's Response: I'm just full of surprises (and, apparently, angst).
Date: June 04, 2008 05:54 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Love this story. Really.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that. Thank you.
Date: June 04, 2008 04:31 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
It felt like a victory because he knows what it means! Good chapter. I was unsure of where you were going with Maddie's story in the last chapter, and now it is all becoming clearer. I'm a little slow, like Kevin. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: June 04, 2008 04:26 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Sweet cheeks!!
And yay for Pam not taking Roy's name. It will make it easier when they split.
Author's Response: Maddie is a cheek pincher of the worst kind. ;)
Date: June 03, 2008 09:35 pm Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
More! Soon please!
Author's Response: You can count on it. :)
Date: June 03, 2008 09:14 pm Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
you are awesome! Thanks for the rapid updates.
You've written such amazing angst here. And you're hiding just enough of how each of them feels that I wonder what each of them are actually expecting will come out of this week.
I also like how you're keeping Pam's thoughts of Roy away. She must feel very conflicted that she's invited Jim while Roy is away, but obviously she's trying very hard not to think about that. And Jim's trying so hard to convince himself he can be just friends, I can totally buy that.
At the end, I was waiting for her to say "Uh, no, I didn't ... I didn't marry Roy" Damn it. But I still have hope that they didn't actually sign the wedding certificate or something ;-)
oh and Maddie is a great character, I hope we get to see more of her.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. There's a lot going on beneath the surface, but that's just Jim and Pam, isn't it? Maddie will be around a little more, I can promise that.