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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 10, 2020 03:22 pm Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

Oh. Ow. Owowowowow. That was a callback from canon that we needed but didn't deserve.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2008 01:51 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

Aww. Angst makes me sad, but it's gotta be there! Plus, it helps when it's written so well. ;)

Author's Response: And for me this is like Angst Lite, same great taste, fewer tears. I'm glad you like it. :)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 05:36 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

"No, nothing," he said. He added quietly, "I wasn't expecting anything more from you."  *big HUGE sigh*  Have I mentioned lately how much I love this story, these little moments?  Well, I do...very much.



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 05:09 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

I am loving this story! Well done to Jim for calling her on her evasiveness! Poor Pam! Look forward to reading more (there is going to be more, right?!).

Author's Response: There will be plenty more. Lots more. I'm glad you're loving it. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2008 04:15 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

Oooh! Angst. Nice.  I'm afraid to write angst in my story because I'm afraid I won't do it well.  Great great job.

Also, I loved "Lofty".  That made me laugh! 



Author's Response: For some reason I just can't get away from angst. Although I usually reserve the worst of it for Angela, poor gal.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 08:39 pm Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

Oh, so this is how it's going to be -- mac and cheese with a side of angst.  OK.  Play dirty, why dontcha....


Author's Response: I give and I taketh away. I'm going to be the co-manager of Hotel Hell soon enough.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2008 08:36 pm Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?

Loving these fast updates!  This is a great line:

He knew that whatever he said next had the possibility to bury him, so he played it cool.

I definitely can see Jim's always having to do this little mental dance.  Very nice.



Author's Response: Jim always has to be on his toes.

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