Date: April 06, 2017 06:35 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
This is painful! (I mean that in a good way!)
Date: June 07, 2008 08:28 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Argh! I am dying to find out what happens next, but I am just too awesome to not leave a review, so there you go.
Your writing owns the face off of a lot of writing. :D
Okay, reading on.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you're liking it! :)
Date: June 06, 2008 06:56 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Lisahoo is right! Extra points for that sweet Charlie Brown reference! You can just feel the tension mounting in this story. I can't wait for the volcano of emotions to erupt!!!
Author's Response: The volcano blows its top eventually. And, if I may say so (and I may be biased), I think it's a pretty big explosion. I hope so anyway! :)
Date: June 06, 2008 12:38 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
ooo the other stuff. I can't wait
Author's Response: The other stuff will be up soon. :)
Date: June 06, 2008 10:37 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
okay, this is more agonizing than booze cruise was. He always has so many openings but just refuses to go there. You're staying very true to character (although I wish that Pam will start using some of her braveness that she must have learned from Maddie by now!)
I'm eager for more!
Author's Response: More soon. You can hold me to that. Pam's a little slow with the braveness, but she'll get there.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:26 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Hurry, Hurry!! Do we get any of Pam's POV?
Author's Response: A little Pam POV happens in the next chapter. She has her fair share of angsty thoughts as well.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:24 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Oooo! "Other stuff!" Squeeeeee!
Author's Response: The other stuff is big stuff, trust me.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:18 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
aww, points for quoting Charlie Brown ;o)
Just don't let Pam pull the football away as he's running up to kick it.
Author's Response: Jim fares a little better than Charlie Brown.