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Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 12:53 pm Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

"Wow, you know, I thought that would be awkward. I was totally wrong about that though, huh? And, as much as I would love to stick around, cause this is, wow, so much fun - I really have to get back in there because now there's only one mouse in this box."

Wow, that sounds like something I would say. I can't wait to read more. However, if Jim continues being an idiot I may have to break something.

Author's Response: Haha, I'd hate to see this story become the root of vandalism.

Reviewer: raspberryjam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 12:52 pm Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

oh! jim needs to quit being an idiot

Author's Response: Amen.

Reviewer: Sunshinegirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 09:27 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

AMAZING! My heart is breaking, but in a totally good way. I'm soo hooked to this story.

Author's Response: Glad it's in a good way! And glad you're liking it. :)

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 09:20 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

Oh, I love Abby. She's spunky and blatantly honest! Good for her!

Best line so far: Don't be an idiot.



Author's Response: Well somebody needed to say it to him.

Reviewer: WeBrokeHisBrain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 08:39 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

You've done a great job with the development of Abby's character. She's the friend we've all wished Jim would have to kick him in the right direction.

I have to think he's right though in not pursuing her.. she's married and therefore off-limits. She needs to make the decision for herself and hopefully she already has. I'm probably reading into this too much, but does she have a PA cell phone number already? Has she already moved back from CA?

Also, Mopey-Jim is pretty sexy.

Author's Response: Well, lets just say Pam is probably sticking around for a bit...

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 07:38 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

*HUGE sigh*  That was so good.

 

I miss you every day.

555-0101.

Love,
Pam

Wow.  That just kills me. 



Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. And hopefully you'll be un-killed soon. :)

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 06:19 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

good one, carbondalien. I always appreciate when Jim stands up for himself in a non-cruel way, that shows Pam he loves her, but he won't be played with, even unintentionally. Pam needs to break up her own marriage, not force Jim to do it! good chapter.

Author's Response: Exaaaaaactly. Glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Daoust Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 06:01 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

I like Abby. She's smart.  Jim, on the other hand... 

These are some rapid fire chapters. Good work, Carbo.



Author's Response: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: CHT 8635 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2008 05:49 am Title: and i know you're letting go, but this is good advice

Oh phew! This is a bit of an emotional rollercoaster! Pam needs to give Roy the heave-ho.

Author's Response: Hopefully at the end the ride will have been a good one. :)

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