10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2008 08:14 am Title: In Their Bedroom
Perfect ending. I enjoyed this very much.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it! :D Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: June 27, 2008 09:38 am Title: In Their Bedroom
Very cute. The concept you came up with was very sweet, and all seven stories were charming.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It means a lot!!! :)
Date: June 27, 2008 07:28 am Title: On the Playground
That was a very sweet way to wrap up this story. I didn't comment much, but enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and took the time to review! :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 07:42 am Title: In the Chapel
you know, I kind of like thinking about these stories as a process... I know they're isolated, but it's very sweet to look at them together :P and btw you successfully faked me out in the beginning ;-)
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm glad -- that was my intention!!! And yeah, ever since I wrote the fourth chapter, I have been looking at them similarly... weird how that happens! Again, thanks for taking time away from crunching numbers at CERN to review -- it's always appreciated! :D
Date: June 08, 2008 05:57 pm Title: On the Playground
I don't think there is anyone who's not completely baffled by it....but you've made me much more enthusiastic about waking up for work tomorrow morning! So thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 05:43 pm Title: At O'Byrne's Pub
this theoretical physicist really appreciated that little endnote :) So technically we have to have separate universes in which all combinations of the stories have happened together, right? right. These are great, btw!
Author's Response: Sure thing! I'm a little baffled by string theory myself (but I vow to learn as much as I can about it!), so I'm glad my reference made sense to someone out there! Thanks for reviewing!!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 05:01 pm Title: At the Prom
Wow! Even with the Chapter Notes at the beginning, did not expect THAT! Poor Jim. I could just smack Pam. No worries about having gone too far. Very good chapter. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Phew... yeah, I thought I would take more slack for not having Pam and Jim get together at the end of this one, and worried that maybe the physicality was too much for high schoolers... but I'm glad it's going over well! :) Thanks for the review!
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 04:40 pm Title: In the Library
I like that Pam takes the initiative with the physical contact. And Jim is such a sweetheart. I'm really enjoying this story. Good chapter.
Author's Response: I kind of wanted to push Pam a little bit OOC because she's always so shy but I think with Jim she can be herself a bit more, and come on... who DOESN'T want to get physical with Jim?! Am I right? haha Thanks! :)
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 03:55 pm Title: On the Fieldtrip
Pop Rock Pam :) Perfect description of the way ten year olds behave. These two are just meant for each other. Very cute.
Author's Response: I thought so too! I teach 12 year olds all day, so I kinda took inspiration from them. It was so much fun to write in the mind of a fifth grader!!! Thanks again for the reviews!!!
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 03:30 pm Title: On the Playground
Aww, this is cute. Just noticed this today. Am looking forward to catching up on the rest.
Date: June 07, 2008 01:39 pm Title: At the Prom
That was wonderful! Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! Will do (probably this afternoon!) haha :D
Date: June 07, 2008 06:58 am Title: At the Prom
Oh Pam, how could do that with our Jim and then go back to Roy?!
Great story!
Author's Response: I know, right? Well, some things had to stay true to canon, I think... but I don't know if it would be unheard of. Glad you enjoyed it! :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 12:54 pm Title: In the Library
That was so adorable. Jim is protective of his Pam even when they are young. Too cute. I can't wait to see where their relationship takes them. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait to write where their relationship takes them... ;)
Date: June 05, 2008 07:19 am Title: In the Library
Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww! Another great chapter just like I expected! You're doing such a fantastic job on this story and so far, I've enjoyed each bit of it! I'm eager to read what will happen next! I love the thought of Jim being referred to as Elephant Ears : )
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it! I didn't want to bash people over the head with references to the show, but little things like the big ears thing link it up well enough, I think. :) Thanks!
Date: June 05, 2008 06:38 am Title: In the Library
Oh so sweet, I am really enjoying these, I liked the Central Park one too.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks again! I thought it would be kinda cute to show Jim on an actual grade five class fieldtrip to the UN... glad you liked it! :)
Date: June 04, 2008 09:41 pm Title: On the Playground
AWWWW! This is SO cute! I especially loved the end of the first chapter where she tells her sister that she is going to marry Jim. That's so precious! I love the way you portrayed Michael and Dwight. It was perfect! You're doing great and i can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Yeah, I figured it would be something Pam would say. I have no idea if she even has a sister - but it's AU so I say she absolutely can have a sister!!! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 01, 2008 08:36 pm Title: On the Playground
I thought this was very sweet, hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Maybe it's not terribly original, but I felt like writing something so fluffy it makes cotton balls feel like sandpaper :) Glad you liked it!