Date: June 30, 2008 11:15 am Title: Cold Open
Oh my dear lord I can so picture that whole group call phone ringing gag. Perfect Michael moment.
10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2008 11:47 pm Title: Cold Open
Again, excellence. Oh, I forgot to mention in my last review -- bonus gifts for making Natalie from "outside" of Pittsburgh. I live "outside" of Pittsburgh, so, yay! And I heart Zach Levi as Josh! Wish I grew up next door to the Halpert brothers.
Date: June 03, 2008 07:56 pm Title: Cold Open
DUNDIES!!!!! Oh, that just makes me excited.
As I think others have said about your other fics, I like Natalie, but I'm not all that crazy about the Natalie/Jim relationship. Him not taking Pam's call worried me a little, but that's the only real critique I have.
Overall, these are really hysterical (I laughed out loud a lot) and show an excellent grasp of the characters. Great job!
Date: June 03, 2008 04:18 pm Title: Cold Open
There is something about Natalie that makes me miss Pam more. The fact that Jim looked up to reception the way he would if Pam was just depressing (because Pam's not there) but I'm really loving your stories so far.
Date: June 03, 2008 04:18 pm Title: Cold Open
great start...love the walkie talkies...priceless...can't wait for more