Reviews For Dundies, Take Two
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Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2009 09:25 pm Title: End tag

Incredible. Absolutely incredible. This is so in-character that I almost don't believe it! It's as if you're a writer for the show!
AMAZING work. Absolutely amazing.

Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2008 01:06 am Title: End tag

"Sorry. When I start drinking, I become an uncontrollable, sexual human being."

That made me laugh out loud. It made me LOL.

Author's Response: Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed Drunk Dwight! Most of all, I'm glad that you are finding it funny, because that's always my biggest concern. I am my worst critic, I guess. :) Thank you!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2008 04:07 pm Title: End tag

Great story -- I love reading script fanfics. I think you did a great job w/ the proposal. I was nervous about where you were going w/ Jim and Natalie, but everything looks good for Jim and Pam. (?)

Love Drunk!Dwight and the tag was spot on, true to the characters.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Ah, Jim and Pam own my heart. I wouldn't dare mess with them. ;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2008 05:33 pm Title: End tag

Aw, this was a great one! The proposal was so sweet and so true to them - I think that's how it's actually going to happen on the show - Jim has to just give up the idea of the "perfect" moment. And OMG Dwight/Angela exposed! That was careless of them. And poor Andy. But that was awesome!

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 06:21 pm Title: End tag

i loved it...i felt like pam would be furious that jim didn't propose and finally tell him which would lead him to propose...can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you! Fancy New Beesly is all, "I want a proposal, dammit!" haha

Reviewer: i_love_jam Signed [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 05:14 pm Title: End tag

I loved the proposal! (Especially how Pam didn't believe him and Michael interrupting was great, too.) The end was hilarious, I could see it happening on the show! Great episode, can't wait for the next one (#5, I think?)!

Author's Response: Thank you. Yup, I'm "hard at work" on #5. And by "hard at work" I mean procrastinating from doing actual homework. Thanks for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked the proposal. :D

Reviewer: Ellie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2008 04:20 pm Title: End tag

Of course I'm enjoying it. And while in my mind, Jim would have proposed about 2 seconds after Pam's final talking head in Goodbye Toby. But, it's realistic, and I liked it. Update ASAP!

Author's Response: Thank you, Ellie. I'm keeping busy with ep #5, I hope you enjoy it once it's up!

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