Date: June 17, 2008 10:20 am Title: The Couch
Nice job. I agree that Jim wouldn't mind Pam in his bed, regardless of circumstance. ;)
Wait! The stairs were too far away? Hmmm.
Author's Response: Yeah, those stairs were a little too daunting at three or four in the morning. ;)
Date: June 16, 2008 01:17 pm Title: The Couch
Okay, first of all, this: "You deserve to have someone love you because of all that stuff and not in spite of it" -- totally encapsulates why Jim's right for her and Roy isn't. Lovely.
All right, Pam had better wise up and take advantage of the situation here. (That came out sounding very wrong, hee.) I keep waiting for her to kiss him (or vice versa). Don't go upstairs; I'm sure there's plenty of room on that couch for two....
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry, Pam may seem like a sweet innocent girl, but there is no way she's passing up an opportunity like this one. Her tired body just won't let her! Or at least that's the story she'll tell herself. ;)
Anyway, thanks again for your reviews! I'm very glad you liked the story so far.
Date: June 13, 2008 08:57 am Title: The Couch
Sweet! I loved the back and forth of "you are such a girl!/ Am not!" And the final whisper causing goosebumps. I got them too. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: You got goosebumps? That's so cool! I did too, but that's not really surprising considering that I'm the one who wrote about them. ;) Anyway, I really appreciate your review and I hope you like the end.
9 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 03:50 pm Title: The Couch
Azlin, I really am enjoying this story so far.Call me crazy, but I can get enough of some old school S2/S3-ish angst. :D Your dialogue rings true to my ears, and I like the various emotional stages Pam is going through, and Jim's willingness to listen. (As a guy who's been on the receiving end of an evening of talking like this, I can testify that Jim's a brave man. :D)
Look forward to more!
Author's Response: Every so often you need a little angst. I'm glad the dialogue sounds right. I'm a little worried about it in the third chapter. They do a lot of talking and some of it I'm not totally convinced is in character, but I figure we're all allowed to bend characterizations every now and then, right? It's like poetic license. Or something... Anyway, thanks for the review! I hope you like the ending.
Date: June 10, 2008 04:54 am Title: The Couch
So sweet! I bet Jim's a great listener. I really loved this! More please?
Author's Response: How could he not be? He's pretty much perfect. At least, he is in my mind. And he definitely is in this story. So glad you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 12:41 am Title: The Couch
Can't wait for the ending! I love this story so far, I'm adding it to my favorites. =]
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I'm very flattered that it's one of your faves. I really like it too, and now that it's done I'm a little sad to see it go. Hope you like the end!
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 11:15 pm Title: The Couch
i love it! gimme more! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! And it took me longer than I'd expected, but the story is now complete. :)
9 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 01:12 pm Title: The Couch
Ha! It's like time-lapse photography, I love it! Couch snuggles!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's a little different. It was meant to be like one of those montages that always come in the middle of a romance movie. I thought about writing everything out in more detail, but I liked it better this way. Thanks for the review!