1 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2023 02:25 pm Title: playful
Oh my gosh I just found this and it is sooooo great!! I love this playful Jam and inquisitive Jam and learning about each other Jam. I love your explanation of Pam as trying to be “not selfish” in her relationship with Roy ultimately leading to losing who she was… just a delicious little peek at our fave couple and some of the amazing backstory…fantastic work!!
1 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2021 01:00 pm Title: playful
"It’s amazing how he can make me feel like a sex goddess one moment and a little girl the next. He’s so *fun*."
I don't know why, but for some reason this line has really stuck with me. It just feels like such a good encapsulation of their attraction to each other and how they treat each other.
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2011 06:11 am Title: forgiving
I've never read this before now, it showed up on the "story of the moment" portion, and I have to tell you that this is just excellent. Superb. I got a little teary at their confessions in this last chapter. Adding to favorites right now. You write with such depth, I get so caught up in all of your stories. This one was perfect!
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 07:13 pm Title: forgiving
Perfect, I have nothing else to say -)
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 06:58 pm Title: relaxed
Loveeeeeeee. You are truly amazing.
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 06:47 pm Title: hesitant
Angst is awesome. I enjoyed Pam getting annoyed by Jim's constent urge to please her, you covered that really well.
As usual I LOVED IT =)
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 06:31 pm Title: patient
It's so wrong that I find Jim having a milk glass sexy LMAO.
Maybe not as happy as the first part, but equally awesome :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 06:19 pm Title: playful
Pam is so cute. Seriously know I will love this little series already. How have I missed all of your stories =)
You nail the characters perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 09:05 am Title: forgiving
Oh God, that last line killed me. I loved the rest, and the way they opened up to each other, but that last line. Gah, that packed a punch. Man, you're good! Keep it up!
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 08:59 am Title: relaxed
I loved this. I loved it a lot. I like the deep conversations and how they can turn into silly and sweet ones. You did a great job with this one. Nice work!
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 08:54 am Title: hesitant
I love that you can give us the angst without making it painful. I mean, it's gut twisting, but I'm not screaming at the computer. It's realistic and it's sweet. It's fluffy angst, I like to call it flangst. It's excellent, whatever it is. I'm looking forward to reading more of what you've written. Great job!
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 08:48 am Title: patient
I liked this one a lot. You're right, it wasn't as happy as the first one, but it was completely realistic and satisfying to read. I like that you had the encouraging Jim conversation, because Jim does so much to encourage Pam and her dreams, and I loved that you allowed Pam to reciprocate on this. Great work. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 08:42 am Title: playful
"So when I met Jim, it was almost like I rediscovered my own existence."
How true is that? It's a line that stuck with me on this one. I love that you were able to encompass so much of Jim and Pam's relationship in that one line. It's so powerful. And I love that they don't "Hate" anything about each other, but the things that bother them turn into revelations and such instead of arguments. So sweet. Excellent work.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2008 06:49 pm Title: forgiving
Incredible. You are simply an unbelievably talented author. I could have read three chapters of the "I Forgive You" game alone. The emotions in this story are so true and powerful and moving. A very touching and lovely story. Thank you so much for sharing it!
Author's Response: Stop it, you're making me blush :) Seriously, thanks, Desslok. I really appreciate it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2008 02:19 am Title: forgiving
all right, dammit...the way you just get them is a little too intimidating. this was amazing. sweet, sexy, sad, strained...sorry about the alliteration there. you struck such a fantastic balance between their openness, their fear, their reluctance, but most of all their overwhelming love.
simply outstanding.
Author's Response: Thanks LC. Hey, I love alliteration. I'm glad you liked this; I really loved writing it and was pretty proud of how it turned out. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! :)
Date: August 31, 2008 07:33 am Title: forgiving
I know you wrote this a little while ago now, but I just want to let you know that this was a beautiful story. The honesty of not only your words, but the images conveyed was so touching. Well done on a lovely piece of writing.
Author's Response: Thanks, epiphilly. I always, always appreciate reviews, especially such kind ones! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it; I certainly loved writing it. :)
Date: July 26, 2008 07:52 am Title: forgiving
I love this fic. I like that it's personal and a mix between honesty and romance. I really liked this last chapter a lot too, especially the forgiving part.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. :)
9 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2008 05:52 pm Title: forgiving
I'm sorry but I can't review right now because I can't think straight.
This was amazing. =]
Author's Response: Thanks :) I appreciate that!
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2008 05:28 am Title: forgiving
If the cameras followed them into their homes, this is EXACTLY how I imagine them to be. So beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2008 06:57 am Title: forgiving
Perfect ending to a perfect series of glimpses into their relationship. This was so thoughtful and sweet and sad and real. Beautiful writing that captured so many emotions so well. Really enjoyed this.
Author's Response: Thanks bitterpill! 'Beautiful writing' is something that really makes my day. I'm glad you enjoyed it...I certainly loved writing it. Thanks for reading :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2008 03:45 am Title: forgiving
Thank you for such a beautiful, touching, tender and heartfelt story! I loved it!!! =)
Author's Response: You're welcome! I'm glad you liked it. I love every adjective you used to describe it. Thanks :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 11:51 pm Title: forgiving
Gahh, you kill me. So intimate and sweet, I really loved this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks flonkerton! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 08:50 pm Title: forgiving
This is so lovely; I can't really even explain why I love it so much! You have amazing imagery when Pam and Jim are getting dressed for her show and then later at her show. I love that Pam has gained some confidence and yes! finally figured out how to accept a compliment. I love the imagery of her piece and how she sees it in her future.
But the very best part of this chapter is conversation in bed and under the covers. I love that they can talk openly about being hurt by the other, but not have it turn into a fight. I actually gasp with a little bit of tears when Jim suggested his forgiveness game because it's so deliciously them - a being honest, but having it be a game too.
Just top notch all the way!
Author's Response: Wow JennCity, thanks for all the kind words! 'Amazing imagery' is high praise to me. And I don't know why every conversation I visualize between them is always in bed, but it sure is fun to write. I'm really glad to have gotten a few comments about the under-the-covers thing; that whole image was strong in my mind. It's a great compliment to know the 'game' moved you. Thanks so much for leaving your comments, it's very motivating and encouraging to get such great feedback! :D
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 05:46 pm Title: forgiving
This was just so gorgeous, callisto! Your writing is so sensual and you hit the perfect balance of yearning and anxiety and joy for these two! Great, pitch perfect dialog.
I could go on and on. Just beautiful.
Author's Response: thanks VB! You always leave such sweet comments like 'gorgeous' and 'beautiful' and let's not forget 'perfect.' I'm glad you liked this, it was really a joy to write. Thanks for reading! :)
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 03:01 pm Title: forgiving
This chapter is so beautiful. Absolutely wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)