Reviews For Going Away Present
Reviewer: NanReg Signed 
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Date: July 05, 2008 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
8 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2008 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Almost missed this, Steph. Great story. IMHO, you captured Toby and Keely so well. I like the idea of her being a voice of reason yet still so Kelly.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2008 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
"The feeling that she was losing something she hadn’t even known she wanted."
Great line. I like how Kelly was trying so hard to cheer him up and then ended up sad herself.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: gamesetmatch Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2008 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: June 26, 2008 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww! Kelly and Toby, two very lonely people who are adorable together!
Author's Response: Thank you. I think they're adorable together too.
Reviewer: quotidianzenith Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 26, 2008 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
9 [Report This]Date: June 26, 2008 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I love this. And your characterizations were very realistic.
Author's Response: Thank you!