Date: August 01, 2009 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
so cute. "can't i kiss my wife?" best line i've ever read.
Date: July 14, 2008 07:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Glad you're continuing this 'cause I'm still having fun! And possible JAM babies as a bonus!
Date: July 14, 2008 05:57 am Title: Chapter 2
Another great story!
Date: July 14, 2008 04:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my, Jam!Babies! YES!
9 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2008 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Well, this was a good follow-up to your last chapter. It fills us in when everything happened, which is good.
I loved the first 'paragraph' before the ***. It was very nice and it told us anything we need to know. You got Toby's tone precise, as though you knew that he would frown upon seeing Pam's name as Pamela Halpert. You also got the unique tone of each person and it made the story sound somewhat, more REAL. Mainly, I think this was a very good chapter and I can't wait to see how the secret is leaked. :D
Date: July 13, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw, I like this. I'd definitely like to see where it goes from here.
8 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
More please!