1 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2018 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot, and one of the best elements is how it blends episode-script-style exchanges and talking heads with pure narrative.
9 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2016 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Squee! THIS is how it should have gone on the show (Karen who?)!
And Dwight at the end was fantastic.
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
That kicked ass. Especially the Dwight-ified ending. Awesome. :D
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD. I love this! I just -- eeeee!!!! First of all, you have nailed every single one of these characters (TWSS!); really, their voices are just spot-on. I was laughing out loud at Michael's first talking head. ANd it's a really interesting take on post-Casino Night - I think it's more realistic because it's not hyper-dramatic like the stuff some people write (who shall remain nameless but go by their gender and favorite number, lalalalala). Seriously, though I am so glad you posted this - so glad! And there's more! I'm forcing myself to stop reading for now because I've got a ton of work to do, but I will ABSOLUTELY be finishing this story as soon as I can steal some time. Bravo! Just -- BRAVO!
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 04:11 am Title: Chapter 6
This was so great from beginning to end. Yay!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 6
This was an excellent first story! It goes through all of the emotions and fortunately results in the happy ending we all love. Everyone sounded so spot on - you did such a great job with this. Glad you posted it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 6
*Great* fic, fun to read. You're really good with the suspense!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ok, I'm scared to death of Drunk!Jim behind the wheel of his car, but I guess that's not the point of this chapter...I can't believe the 'all I wanted was you' speech he gave Pam! Even drunk, I never expected him to come out and say it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awwww... what a lovely story. You had me on the edge of my seat, wondering how their meeting would work out and worrying that he was going to call Jessica and make a big ol' mess! Loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
The "Truth Booth" - I like it. I hope it catches on in other fics.
The party planning committee assuming Pam is in love with Jim - if only they knew...
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 6
wonderful fic. I loved every chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait to read the next chapter
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
Good going Pam
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 09:05 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow what a chapter. So much going on I have to reread to digest everything.
Date: September 18, 2006 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1
great writing even if it wasn't what I want to hear.
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 08:43 am Title: Chapter 6
Awesome! I held my breath waiting for the happy ending...and then there it was. Really great job keeping the tension going through all the chapters. I loved the reference to Office Space(one of my favorites).
8 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 03:12 am Title: Chapter 6
This ending is adorable! Wouldn't that be lovely? And Dwight's reaction...lol!
10 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my goodness, that's one of the best reads!! I wish it would turn out that way on the show! I love surprises like that! I think I just swooned to death! THANK YOU! You made my night!
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
Fantastic! This was sweet, sad, slightly angsty, but at the same time, so funny. I loved how the other office members were involved - particularly the talking heads. Great characterizations and just a great story overall!
8 [Report This]Date: September 17, 2006 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
Best last line, EVER. This was awesome. Amazing job.
Date: September 17, 2006 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
...I think you just killed me.
Five chapters and I COULD NOT STOP READING. Ohmigod, so good. I can't even... It's late. I'm not coherent.
I am very, very, very eagerly awaiting the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I just posted the last chapter.... I was just reading it over to make sure I didn't make any glaring mistakes, heh.