1 [Report This]Date: May 25, 2018 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this story a lot, and one of the best elements is how it blends episode-script-style exchanges and talking heads with pure narrative.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
OH MY GOD. I love this! I just -- eeeee!!!! First of all, you have nailed every single one of these characters (TWSS!); really, their voices are just spot-on. I was laughing out loud at Michael's first talking head. ANd it's a really interesting take on post-Casino Night - I think it's more realistic because it's not hyper-dramatic like the stuff some people write (who shall remain nameless but go by their gender and favorite number, lalalalala). Seriously, though I am so glad you posted this - so glad! And there's more! I'm forcing myself to stop reading for now because I've got a ton of work to do, but I will ABSOLUTELY be finishing this story as soon as I can steal some time. Bravo! Just -- BRAVO!
10 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2006 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
The "Truth Booth" - I like it. I hope it catches on in other fics.
The party planning committee assuming Pam is in love with Jim - if only they knew...
Date: September 18, 2006 08:59 am Title: Chapter 1
great writing even if it wasn't what I want to hear.