Reviews For Firsts
Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2008 07:14 am Title: First Day
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Date: July 16, 2008 07:14 am Title: First Day
"Um, yeah, hi, I'm Jim? I'm new here?"
LOVE the callback to The Merger. Very cute. I'm looking forward to your next first!
Author's Response:
Hee hee! Yeah, I kind of pictured that line in the merger to be an inside joke between Jim and Pam.
More is coming your way soon. Thanks for the review Abigail!
Reviewer: jinx Signed 
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Date: July 15, 2008 05:05 pm Title: First Day
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The voice of Michael is perfect in this chapter. Milkshake was the perfect painfully awkward yet funny choice.
Author's Response:
Thanks jinx! I did a little research about hit songs in 2003 and trolled the list for something that Michael would love, but that would be highly inappropriate. Score!
Thanks for reading!