10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2006 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, continue, please! I want to see how Jim talks his way out of this one!
Great first fic!
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Ummm... YEAH!!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2006 07:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Ummm... YEAH!!!
6 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just to help you out-
It was a Travis song on the roof in The Client, not a Snow Patrol song. Good fic!
Author's Response: Thanks Winky, I actually took the Snow Patrol idea from other fics, and threw it on the list, thinking Pam may have heard it later and had it remind her of that night, I didn't mean to put the actual song that was used in the episode. It was meant more as a shout-out to fics I've read, but I underdstand that it was unclear. Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hell, yeah, we want to know more. You know as soon as I read the part about the girl, I went, "Oh... crap." I can't wait to read the next part. Nice job on a first story.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
yes continue and make it a good confrontation too.
9 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely continue!! I would love to see what happens next.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, continue. This is great so far. I love her calling Jim "Nothing."
Date: September 19, 2006 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Most definitely continue. I think it's great so far.
10 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, you should continue, and I think the girl in the car with the slightly slutty top should be his sister or aunt or cousin or lesbian friend.
8 [Report This]Date: September 19, 2006 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
YES, keep going! That was very emotionally real- the sadness, the dreariness of Pam's life. And the song is fantastic. Great first effort.