Date: August 28, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
AAHHHHHH!!
That...was mean. Talk about a cliffhanger!
I am so in love with this story! Thanks so much Mox. I know you're busy and all but...please hurry!
-Mint
Date: August 28, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ow, Moxie. You make my heart hurt. But seriously, who hasn't driven by that someone's house, sad if they're out, and terrified if they're actually there. Ah, the double-edge of heartache.
Date: August 28, 2008 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 10
HOLY CRAP!! HURRY!!!!!
Date: August 28, 2008 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
Another cliffhanger huh? You're quite skilled at building up the anticipation ;)
I have to say I really liked this chapter...the driving down Jim's street...great descriptions...I think we've all been there. Two-thumbs up!
Date: August 28, 2008 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Awesome. House fucked with Jim before Casino Night. Your House is spot-on by the way. Truly perfect. The cane stuff is so exact.
Date: August 28, 2008 10:56 am Title: Chapter 4
Hee! Awesome. It's a Wonderful Life. I'm so glad House is Pam's angel. That's fantastic.
Date: August 28, 2008 10:47 am Title: Chapter 2
STUPID. Karen lies. This is glorious. Must get to next chapter...
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ah...I've only watched a couple of episodes of House, but I LOVE this story. Moxie, you've got another winner on your hands.
9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 08:19 am Title: Chapter 9
Heeeeeeeee. This makes me so smiley and happy : )
Date: August 21, 2008 06:40 am Title: Chapter 9
Good to see House back!
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh you're killing me. Go to work, PAM! Wake up, JIM!
WRITE FASTER, Mox! Oh...sorry about that one... ;) I'll just wait patiently over here....
Date: August 20, 2008 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
The storage closet at the Chili's! Two fantasies in one!
And yes, it is IN-SANE how great this story is. House is killing me here, that crazy freak.
Date: August 20, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
Big Money! No Whammys! Oh, Moxie, I like you. This continues to be great.
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh, Pam... *sigh*. I love this more than I can tell you and I'm crazy stoked about chapter 10!
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Fantastically realistic reactions by both parties. Loving this story, Moxie!
9 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
No angry letters from this quarter, either! I liked how Pam's borrrowed courage only went so far before it petered out. Thought Jim's reaction was pretty believable. I was surprised that Pam didn't call him on being so angry with her for doing the exact same thing he did on Casino Night – confess to being in love and hope like hell for the right response.
Anxiously awaiting House's reappearance ... and Pam's next confrontation with Jim!
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2008 05:17 am Title: Chapter 8
Angry letters? No, no, there will be none of that. This was good. This was raw hurt, exactly in-character. We've seen them get cold and angry at each other before; it's exactly right. I loved House insisting that he get to watch the match, too. Ah, I have good feelings about how you're going to resolve all of this (no speculation, just a lot of faith in you!).
Date: August 19, 2008 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 8
Angry?? No...I know you're not done with this! It was refreshing (in some weird way) to see Jim's behavior written in a way that matched his actions in most of S3. I like to hear people's feelings/words get misunderstood and tangled up as they try to communicate...just like in real life. Well done again - more soon, pretty please??
Date: August 19, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Haha, not angry at all. In fact, I'm not surprised at Jim's reaction at all after a Beesly bombshell like that. It's going to take a bit of time for that to sink in, and aloofness is his only defense right now.
Can't wait for more House-fortified bravery from our Pam!
Date: August 19, 2008 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
You are so great at what you do!! I am loving this story! Can't wait for more!
Date: August 19, 2008 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
Will House come back?
10 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2008 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
Upon the second read, this still had the same effect on me. You've captured the tension here in an amazing way! I'm trusting that this "patient" does not die! Incredible job. I love what you are doing with this story. Thank you for sharing :)
Date: August 19, 2008 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 8
Nope. No angry letters here. I seem to be into pain these days...and there's the little matter of this story still being marked as incomplete... Bring it, sister.
10 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2008 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aw omg :( This is heartbreaking, but I'm so so so glad you didn't have Jim all excited and happy at Pam's confession. I see an eventual turnaround in the future... unless you are a cruel, cruel woman.
Date: August 19, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 8
Wow, you really captured S3 Pod!person Jim here. This is the 'strange unexplained bleeding or coma' part of the show, where everything gets really crazy right before House figures out what's really causing the problem, right?