9 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 08:12 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I loved it, very cute idea, and I think Jim-like to send two boxes for both outcomes. He's thoughtful like that... Sweet romantic and just what I needed this morning-- Thanks!!
Author's Response:
glad I could help your day off to the right start :o)
thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 08:05 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I really liked this, especially Jim's letter and the funny little bits (Esteban and the mom haircut.) Question: If you don't know what a mom haircut is, does that mean you might have a mom haircut, because, er... never mind. ;)
Teeny typo in the second sentence - she SAT down with a thud.
I love the idea that Jim would send the two boxes with different things for different test outcomes. That's fantastic and original, and I imagine that idea came to you in a flash and caused you to write this. Whatever was the inspiration, I'm glad you had it.
Dawesome, PPC. :)
Author's Response:
I would define a mom haircut, as so short and/or boring that it requires zero maintenance, therefore fitting the "mom" lifestyle. My mom has had one all my life...haha.
Thanks for pointing out my typo, I fixed it!
And seriously this was one of those things where I was trying to sleep and pondering a completely different idea and it really did hit me like a train. I'm glad this one worked out though, usually those late night flashes turn out to be just...yuck.
thanks for the review Kev, you always make me smile :o)
Date: August 21, 2008 07:38 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
oh my GOSH this was precious!!! i don't know what else to say, but i love it. it's so cute how he's coming to NY but she doesn't know it. and the Phillies jersey! too sweet. i love it.
Author's Response: precious is one of my all time favorite adjectives. thanks for using it to describe my story! :o)
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 07:23 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
Absolutely loved it, especially the letter. What can I say? I'm a sappy romantic.
Author's Response:
I love sappy romantics, they are my ideal audience :o)
thanks for the review!
Date: August 21, 2008 06:53 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I really like this story-very sweet and I loved that Jim was downstairs to whole time. Awwww!
Author's Response: I love inducing "awwww"s... thanks for the review!
Date: August 21, 2008 05:54 am Title: If my silence made you leave, then that would be my worst mistake
I like it - it was fun and different. :-)
Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you appreciated a little bit of different...keeps things interesting