Date: September 03, 2008 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww, Pam. How sweet. And I love the bantering tone they use here- they always do use humor to mask the hard parts, don't they? Great!
Date: September 02, 2008 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
oh you are the best! The thoughts, the DIALOGUE is just spot-on terrific. Looking forward to the next chapters!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Date: September 01, 2008 05:50 am Title: Chapter 2
oh squee! The phone conversations are twelve different kinds of adorable!!! And yay for Pam for not being naive. Good for her.
Author's Response: TWELVE different kinds of adorable? I was only aware of seven in the world, and only four of those are naturally occurring. I deserve a Nobel Prize...for fan fiction! :) Thanks so much and glad you're enjoying!
Date: August 31, 2008 11:58 am Title: Chapter 2
Really great job of capturing Pam's nervousness before the big date! Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know she's FNB and all, but she had to have the jitters. :) Update coming soon!
5 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awwww, this is such a great story! This is one of the best first date fics that I've read, seriously. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Wow and gosh golly! I'm not sure what to say other than thanks so much! I hope I don't Schrute it! :)
Date: August 30, 2008 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
This story is so sweet, and I'll be following it!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot - hope you'll enjoy!
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
"After everything Jim and I have been through in the past year, the two of us ever being together was about as unlikely as…well, something very unlikely."
What a cute line. And I love their bantering - you truly have their voices down pat and it is so much fun to read. Can't wait for the actual date!
Author's Response: Thanks! I always enjoy, on the show, when Pam - despite being bright and articulate - gets herself tripped up...usually when it involves Jim. :) Thanks too for your kind compliment re: capturing their voices...I sure try!
Date: August 30, 2008 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Psssht - I don't care if everyone else wrote it! I can't get enough of first day lurrrve. Thanks for putting it out there -- it's well-done and I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Well thanks, MCC...I, in turn, will continue bringing it to you then! :)
Date: August 30, 2008 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sigh. I can never get enough of first-date fics. Especially if they're as well-written as this one. I really like the use of first person. It's fun being in their heads. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thanks Blanca! So happy you're digging the first person; it's nt always popular but I thought it worked here. Look forward to an update soon!
Date: August 30, 2008 11:10 am Title: Chapter 2
I love Pam's cute little outfit and I adore how nervous she is. The banter between them is spot on perfect. Looking forward to the actual date. Nice job with this story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was nervous about using the outfit-picking-out stuff, but I felt in the end like it was relevant. Glad you dig the back and forth - hope you continue to in future chapters! :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 10:02 am Title: Chapter 2
I had a grin on my face the entire time I read this. It just keeps getting better. Despite the popular theme, you managed to make this first date fic so fresh. Your little details (Jim's "Rocky" moment, Pam's pillow smoothing, just to name a couple) are just perfect, and your dialog is spot on. More soon, please!
Author's Response: Thanks thanks thanks - you are always so kind! :) Like I said in the intro, I know this won't be poetic, dramatic or smutty enough for some, but it's just as I pictured it and I'm way too dorky to provide more than this. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 09:01 am Title: Chapter 2
Great story, I'm loving it! You're keeping Jim and Pam both very in character and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really hope you continue to enjoy! :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 07:54 am Title: Chapter 2
I never, ever tire of first date fics - and this one is really good. I'm loving it so far and you have their banter down perfectly! Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Oh yay! And thank you! Hope it continues to deliver in future chapters!