Date: September 02, 2008 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh thanks for including pics of the Banshee! That place looks pretty awesome. Total Jim/Pam date place!
Date: September 01, 2008 08:55 am Title: Chapter 3
Just started your story. It's perfectly Jim and Pam crafted. The phone conversations are adorable. I love how you have written this. The Office writer's might want to contact you!! Thanks for sharing and keep it comin!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! The writers are free to contact me anytime, but I promise you'd only be disappointed by the results. :)
Date: September 01, 2008 08:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Continue to love this story. I love how nervous Jim is to touch Pam. I do hope he conquers his fears though!
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, ONE of them better get it together soon, right? I think my profile gets deleted if I write a first date story that doesn't include some sort of Pim action... :)
Date: August 31, 2008 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love that Jim's nervous and not at all sure. There's so much water under the bridge that the first date would HAVE to be a little bit awkward.
LOVED Pam's tell about the Sixers. That was such a cute moment and I hope Jim finds a way to press her on that later.
I'm really enjoying this and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! I absolutely agree...in my mind, at least, Jim and Pam are kind of...well, dorks, y'know? Awkward is their forte. And don't fret - the Sixers aren't done being mentioned (or abused. Hey, I'm a Pistons fan!). :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Where have you been hiding all ths time, lady?! You show up on this site and hit one out of the park. Just favorited you and this story. I love your attention to detail (the comic book, the coaster, etc.). “Pam.” It's almost a whisper. I make myself meet her eyes. I nearly fell out of my chair. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Well Nan, I'm a bit on the short side in my chair o' wheels here, so hiding isn't really necessary... :) The real answer is I staked a place out at FF.net months ago but was too nervous to post here...and now I wonder why; you all have been so kind! Thanks for the reviews and the favoriting and gosh darnit, all of it!
10 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2008 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yay! Congratulations on your blue ribbon, Little Comment - it is well deserved. I love this story. I love how Jim is so nervous about touching her or saying too much - that really rings true because I can totally see him feeling that way after all they'd been through up until this point. I can't wait to see what happens next. Moonlight walk in the park? Sounds romantic......
Author's Response: Thanks Kells! I am honored...and yet confused, as I don't really know what a blue ribbon is for. My hubby and I speculated that when I wasn't watching this story headed to the county fair and raised a prize cow. Is that it? :) Anyway, thanks for your kind words...having been in a similar situation myself years ago I've always felt like this nervousness and awkwardness would reign supreme. I hope you'll be pleased by what comes next!
Date: August 31, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hey, nothing wrong with another first date fic. At this point, anything is good to help pass the time before the next season starts, right? :D
Seriously, though, I really am enjoying the tone of this piece. I like the first person narrative you've got going, and the alternating POVs of Jim and Pam. i think you've got a really good grasp on the characters, and it's really refreshing to read something so nicely crafted. Good job, and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Gosh Mose...me AND anything help pass the time? I'm touched. :) Thanks for such a kind review! Like I've said before, I know first peson present tense isn't an approach everyone digs, but for this story I felt like it fit - that's how it started coming out and so I ran with it. I do hope you'll enjoy the rest! :)