1 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2020 02:04 am Title: Chapter 2
This did amuse me as we actually went to Disney World in 2012 and Universal just after they’d opened Harry Potter World. It was really good.
Really enjoying this story BTW.
Date: September 06, 2008 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Okay, so I've never been to Disney World even though I was born in Florida. There it is. But this is really cute and makes me wonder what I've missed out on!
Your voices are all very good and that's a tall order with the full ensemble. I like your detail links, too-- that playlist? Two of Us? Seriously? I love that song. And the bingo-prize bookcover was cute too.
I will admit I don't care for the use of "jim" as a verb. But that's just me. :)
So, in short: a fun read!
Author's Response: Oh Callisto, that's it - let's go today! You are missing out on...um, everything. :) Thanks for your kind review and "Two of Us" is an amazing, amazing song. :) And "jim" as a verb...sorry you don't enjoy it. I just find it's the easiest way to describe THAT face. Hope you can look past it and stick with this! Thanks again! :)
9 [Report This]Date: September 06, 2008 11:54 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this story! So original, and I actually laughed out loud at a couple of the talking heads.
Only one complaint: The link to Jim's Playlist doesn't work, and I'm DYING to know what songs he has on there!! Please let me know!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I keep you laughing...arrogant as it sounds, I crack myself with this story a lot. :) And the playlist link is fixed for Chapter Three, so do try again - I really love it and think it captures "my" Jim perfectly!
Date: September 06, 2008 07:16 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like it! You have them down solid. I feel like it could be a real episode. I do want to know what was in Dwight's bag, however. And I love Judy taking a relief smoke at the end. Oh future Judy....
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It would have to be an Office movie, because this sucker is long. (Go ahead and say it.) What was in Dwight's bag? It's best none of us know. And Judy...I envy and yet pity that girl already. :)
Date: September 05, 2008 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great job, LC! Heh, LC, like Lauren Conrad, right? I know that's why you chose this name, don't lie. ;)
So I've decided to reread this just for funsies. And because it's that good of course. Way to put these two chapters together; they flow really well into each other. I still really like the Pim exchange on the airplane (sidenote: your Jim's Vacation Playlist link isn't working!), and I think this time around I'll especially enjoy the interactions Dwight and Judy have, and how his opinion of her will slowly change.
I'm also going to pick out Jack-esque lines for every chapter to prove to you how good you are (sans the first chapter because I obviously started into this story late in the game). Here's the one for this chapter: "He gave me the name of the store he bought my perfume from, though, so I really hope I can get up there. I’m almost out. (Phyllis smiles more suggestively than one would’ve thought she could.) Bobby really likes that scent." So disturbingly hilarious. Nailed it.
Author's Response: Yes, DA-S...LC like the girl on The Hills. You are so very clever. *smack* I'm glad you're rereading this for funsies and not because you got confused on whether or not this was cross-posted. (IT IS.) I'll fix that darn link for next chapter. Glad you thought putting two chapters together for this one was a good choice; I like it. And thanks for the Jack-like call out...I'm flattered, he'd probably die. Of embarrassment. Okay, kiddo, you rule for reviewing this behemoth TWICE. All praise due. :)
Date: September 05, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes -- I like it! Thank you for writing, very entertaining. This is making me hanker for some Disney World. I am enjoying the Judy character. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hanker for the home of the Mouse non-stop so this was a good outlet. :) Glad you're enjoying Judy, and hope you continue to enjoy the story! :)
Date: September 05, 2008 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very cute, LC. Again, love the visuals.
I’m not sure we even need a guide; I know plenty about Disney World. Captain EO, Mr. Toad’s Wild Ride, 20,000 Leagues Under The Sea – I know all the best rides. Poor Michael--I think he's going to be disappointed when he sees his favorite rides are no longer in service.
You're doing a fine job at capturing the characters' voices. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to access Jim's vacation playlist. The link took me to MTT's home page.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! Poor Michael indeed...the man can't avoid a power struggle. I'll get that Jim playlist link fixed for Chapter Three - thanks for letting me know!