9 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2016 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm glad I stopped reading and read The Date before continuing. :)
Date: September 18, 2008 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
aw so sad
10 [Report This]Date: September 16, 2008 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
The winner for chapter 5:
Kevin: (standing at the bar) It may just be the glasses, but I think Judy’s pretty hot. I know I’ve got Holly back home, but you know what they say. (He smiles sneakily and nods. ) When the cat’s away, the mouse will play. (Kevin pauses a moment to ponder that metaphor; as he does his smile makes a run for it. ) I’m not sure if I’m the cat or the mouse.
Author's Response: Mr. Comment loved that line, too. :)
Date: September 10, 2008 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
I'm pretty sure I reviewed this before. Well not this chapter, so I just wanted to say I still really like it and I'm excited for more. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much - more coming soon! :)
Date: September 10, 2008 11:26 am Title: Chapter 5
LC -- just wanted to check in & say how much I'm enjoying this. I love lots of Disney details -- although I haven't been in about 20 years (yikes!). I really like the 'ensemble' vibe you've got going, a little something for everyone ;o)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot, Lisahoo! The ensemble approach is fun, if not a lot of work, but it's all those zany characters that make the show great...this may be blasphemy, but just Jim and Pam at WDW? Not that exciting. :)
Date: September 09, 2008 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think with Disney World, you either love it or hate it. I happen to be a Disney geek, although I haven't visited in a few years. My daughter has preferred the coasters over at Islands of Adventure. But All Ears is quite familiar to me, as is Mousesavers, Passporter, the Unofficial Guide and the DIS discussion group. So yeah, I actually used to LIKE lime green, until Karen ruined it.
I think Jim and Pam would have a blast in the Adventurer's Club, don't you?
Looking forward to more Orlando fun.
Author's Response: Well thank you, EH...and I am clearly an idiot, because I have no idea what Karen has to do with lime green. But I love your review despite my stupidity! Thanks for hanging out with this tale and geeking out Disney style with me! I think Jim and Pam would like the AC, but I have a sneaking suspicion that Dwight might have enjoyed it more. :) Thanks again!
Date: September 09, 2008 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
LC, I'm just grinning over here. I really appreciate the effort you've put into this baby of yours. The "deleted scene?" Adorable. You're getting me so psyched. It's especially fun reading a story when you can visualize everything so clearly--that's a tribute to you (and then there's my aforementioned Disney dorkiness). This made me chuckle: Andy Gibb’s “Shadow Dancing” is playing loudly. Way to make me feel nostalgic. I had such a huge crush on Andy Gibb back in the day : ) Oh, and don't let me forget to mention the Star Wars Legos. Awesome touch.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Nan, and I equally appreciate you reading and your kind reviews! I know, it's terrible, but that deleted scene makes me laugh...I just hear Angela when she and Andy are playing MadLibs: "It's a man eating cat food!" Too much. And Andy Gibb's "Shadow Dancing" is a classic - and perfect for a club like 8Traxx! Thanks as always! :)
Date: September 09, 2008 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
Who could not love a story like this? And may I say that I absolutely adore and admire you for going that extra mile for bonus features? So much fun!
Author's Response: Thanks, Mrs. LH! I just put it out there and whoever reads, reads...but I'm pleased you like it! And thanks for checking out the bonus features! Some I put real time and effort in on, so I'm happy when people like them. :) Thanks again!