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Reviewer: sangriaflygirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2008 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 15

Yes more! I love your story! After a ridiculously long work day, I would love to see another chapter tonight if you can. =)

Reviewer: MrsLloyderineHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2008 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 15

more!

Author's Response: Mmmkay! ;)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 15

Of course more, LC.  I was wondering where you got off to. 

I liked this:  Once they were a fair distance away Michael found his grin again. “I can’t believe you’re here,” he said, tipping his head back to look at Holly. She was now the one to look a bit tentative. “I mean, I’m…glad you came,” he added. Very sweet.

And this:  I took the wrong pill before I got on that, brother. Heeee :)



Author's Response: Ech, Nan...that schedule sucked so hard, then we got a few days off...I was being lazy. Forgive me? Glad you enjoyed the Molly - I was rooting for them from second one and I'm happy that, thus far, GD and CO. agree! And Creed...oh Creed. I find that ride...not scary as much as just a bit creepy (still adore it!), and have been on some odd (PRESCRIBED) drugs in life that I think I'd hate to have taken then get on that sucker! ;)

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2008 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 15

More? Yes, please. You've captured all of the voices so well. I especially liked Creed's line:

 "I took the wrong pill before I got on that, brother."



Author's Response: Thanks KatieJ! I've always liked that line too - I love when Creed can hit it outta the park with one line! :)

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