Date: November 18, 2008 11:46 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
I don't know how I missed this one before, but I'm really enjoying it! Great work and I can't wait to read more soon!
Date: November 18, 2008 06:29 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
I really like this story. It's dark and different, which I really like. I feel bad for Jim, Karen is just using him. I can't wait to see when we meet Pam.
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2008 04:07 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
really love this, hope to see more!
Date: November 18, 2008 02:18 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Add me to the people who are ecstatic it's been updated. Love where you're going with this. I can't wait till he meets Pam and see how he feels then. Only thing to improve though is update quicker! :P
Author's Response: Yeah...I didn't do so well with that! Hopefully I'm going to get better! Glad you like the story and I hope you'll stick with it!
Date: November 18, 2008 02:07 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
Good, good, good for Jim! Realizing it would save him an entire day of misery and deciding to spare himself by telling her no. Excellent.
You are no fun, Halpert,” she sighed.
“Emily and Sophie would disagree.”
totally made me giggle
It would have been VERY hard to explain to little girls why he was late ;)
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2008 01:10 pm Title: So You Can Try to Live Again
I'm so excited you updated! This is one of my favorite WIPs and I can't wait for more, especially when you finally get to some JAM. :)
Date: November 18, 2008 12:54 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
I'm so happy you haven't forgotten about this story! I was really excited at the idea before and I still am. Can't wait to see what you come up with!
8 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2008 06:38 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Wow. This was amazing. I just loved it and can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!
Date: September 17, 2008 08:10 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
ok, i am loving this. it's such an interesting AU. i don't like how Jim's letting himself be abused, but I do like the idea that he was desperate to find a forever kind of love, he just looked in the wrong place. i'm very excited to read more!
Author's Response: So I'm really late, but trying to catch up on responding here. Thank you for taking the time to review! Jim is kind of messed up right now...let's hope Pam can straighten him up! :-)
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 10:14 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
What an interesting concept! I'm really curious as to your next move here. JAM you say? I can't wait to see it. This is very good so far and I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Date: September 15, 2008 01:10 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
This is fascinating. I'd always sort of debated within myself whether Jim would have been with Karen (and been happy) if there hadn't been a Pam. I'm completely on board with your interpretation and I can't wait to read more!
Date: September 15, 2008 01:00 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Pleeeeease write more soooooon!
6 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 12:11 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Ooooh, I am intrigued! I have to be honest, when I first read the summary, I wasn't sure, but you have really done a great job. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: September 15, 2008 06:30 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Very nice start. I'm not a big Karen fan but I always try to give her a chance in these stories. You have got my interest with this one.
9 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 06:27 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Very interesting idea for a story. I'm looking forward to seeing how this plays out. When I read the summary, I was wondering how you'd pull off a S2-Pam-like relationship w/Karen. I think the way you did it is just plausible enough to carry the rest of the story. Looking forward to the rest!
Author's Response: Sorry this is months late...thank you for the feedback! Hope you will enjoy the rest of the story when I get time to post!
8 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2008 06:03 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Nice set up, SF. I was intrigued by the premise and didn't know how you would work out the reversal, but you did!
“I do have a life, Filipelli.”
“No, you really don’t,” she shook her head. “Come on, Halpert. We can’t go tomorrow. I have a date.” Ouch.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Karen can be a little oblivious! The role reversal has been a bit difficult and I've obviously taken some liberties with the characters (mostly Karen), but I hope you'll continue to enjoy it! Thanks for taking the time to review!
Date: September 15, 2008 05:53 am Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
OOH, I am intrigued! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: September 14, 2008 09:34 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Very, very intriguing...I can't wait to read more. I like where this is going, and I like how you've portrayed Karen.
8 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 09:18 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
MORE I want more. This looks different and interesting. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope it will continue to pique your interest! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 09:12 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
I have a soft spot for AU stories, and this one looks like it's going to be a keeper. I can't wait to see where you take it. :)
Author's Response: I love AU stories too! I'm really enjoying writing this one, and I hope you'll like the rest of the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 09:05 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
What an amazing original idea. I love it, can't wait for an update (hopefully soon :P)
I wonder if Jim pulls the "I'm in love with u" before leaving, and if he falls for Pam (who i guess will be married?) more than he does for Karen.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! All will be revealed with Pam shortly, but Jim has some things to sort through first. :-) I'll try to update quickly but my writing time is severely lacking thanks to law school! Thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2008 08:41 pm Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing
Even though I've read this sometime ago, this still punches me in the grief bone. I love this idea and your style of writing baffles me with how great it is and how well you describe things without having to describe every single detail because it's all there if you read between the lines. Let's be honest here, I personally think you should become an author because 1) you're great at writing and 2) Law school has taken up all your time and I rarely get to talk to you and my face looks like Jim's sad face for Pam. :( <----like this, only 1000000x magnified! Can't wait to see what happens next! ;)
Author's Response: I have the sad face, too! Law school + 3 hour time difference = So little chat time!! Never fear, though, I am still writing!! I swear! (And if not you're welcome to fly out and kick my ass!)