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Reviewer: LovesKetchup Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 02:01 am Title: Fall

WOW. Its funny because I haven't been here at MTT in well over a year (life gets in the way sometimes) and today, I see this story updated AND finished? Seriously, there's gotta be some serious star-alignage going on because I'm the biggest Ryan/Pam fan there is lol. But truly. Thank you for finishing this. Really, I still wish I had myself a Ryan, especially one as sarcastic and dedicated as your Ryan. And I'm glad that there wasn't much tension between Jim and Pam and that everyone gets their own happy ending.

(Btw, my name is Michelle so I was totally cheering the prospect of naming their baby girl after her favorite uncle on!!!)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2011 09:40 am Title: Spring/Summer

Bennie, despite not being a fan of Pam and Ryan together, I read this whole story yesterday.  Well done!  Congrats to you on finishing this after so much time!  As a reader, I really appreciate the effort.

Reviewer: kaat Signed [Report This]
Date: April 13, 2011 04:58 am Title: Fall

i don't usually go for alternate fic but this is fabulous! you completely captured the characters and so far i'm in complete suspense. a++. :)

Reviewer: clique440 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2008 02:01 pm Title: Winter

Is this story going to be updated? I would really like to find out what happens next.

Reviewer: blanche deveraux Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Winter

Love love love this. The language and dialogue flow really nicely, and I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: fightthis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Winter

Ok, I loved your AU "Dwight comforts Pam in season 3" scene. Pam has such an awesomely unusual dynamic with Dwight and Angela. I'm also definitely loving your AU Pam and Ryan! The way they pretend nothing is between them after a great night together kills me. The way you weaved that night into the rest of the story was awesome. I can't wait for the next part. (Well maybe I can wait, but I certainly don't want to!)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you mentioned the Dwight scene, because that's what I was going for. :)  I love Pam and Dwight's dynamic.  Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: girlnamedbruce Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24, 2008 07:05 am Title: Fall

I don't normally write reviews, but I couldn't resist here because I really want to encourage you to post updates and finish this story. Too, many WIP's go the way of the incompleted, and I think it would be just tragic for that to happen to this story. I love, love, love the way you've portrayed the dynamic between Ryan and Pam. I love/hate how clueless Pam is that Ryan is in love with her--that's so Pam! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  It means so much that you reviewed when you normally don't. :)  And don't worry - it will be finished sooner rather than later.  

Reviewer: Stablergirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Winter

I am loving this story.  Really great and I'm definitely feeling for these characters in this very intense situation!  Good job getting me to buy this Pam and Ryan have a baby story so thoroughly!!!



Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  I'm so pleased that people are "buying" the story, I know it's something that a lot of people wouldn't be that comfortable with. :)

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2008 08:48 pm Title: Winter

wow - this is such a good story! I'm a big fan of Pam/Ryan, and I think this is the first baby fic I've seen :) Great great personification of Michael especially.

Author's Response: Thank you!  Haha,yeah, I don't think that Pam/Ryan babyfic is very common.  And thank you for your compliment on my characterization of Michael!  He's always so much fun to write. 

Reviewer: LovesKetchup Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2008 01:12 pm Title: Fall

I'm absolutely loving this! The characterizations of the whole Pam and Ryan dynamic is spot on (as I've said before :D) and I love that there is still a sort of awkwardness and subtle angst between them.

And running into Dwight at the drug store three towns over! Horrifying!!

Lol I want to comment more on my favorite passages (because this story is officially my favorite story ever), but I'm typing this on my phone. I will be back later to re-read and re-post :D.

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so so much, I'm so happy that you're enjoying it so much!  And an extra thank you for reading and reviewing from your phone - that's dedication. :)

Reviewer: flonkerton Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2008 01:08 pm Title: Winter

I don't know that I have anything constructive to say, but I'm absolutely adoring this story. Its so real and nonconventional, and I looved the weaving of the past in between what's going on.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm so happy that you thought it felt real. :)

Reviewer: dancer288 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22, 2008 11:04 am Title: Winter

wow...amazing...i can't wait for more...i hope as soon as the baby is born pam and ryan will actually get together and stop being stupid!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: LovesKetchup Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Fall

I love this! My secret guilty pleasure is Ryan/Pam stories and they are always so rare to find. You definitely hit the spot with this one.

I love how you took the care to develop their friendship first and woven their two personalities together, making the budding romance believable (and making me want my own Ryan :D).

I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I love your name. :)  And I'm so glad that you think I made it believable!  Plus, who doesn't want their own Ryan, haha. ;)

Reviewer: grammarfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 12:07 pm Title: Fall

creative

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: alli817 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 11:17 am Title: Fall

Awww Thank you! I love Pam/Ryan stories! Can't wait for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: fightthis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2008 10:37 am Title: Fall

A already commented about this story on your LJ, but it doesn't hurt to do it again, right? This is the story that I've always wanted to write. I love that more people are starting to write about Pam/Ryan. Can't wait for the next part!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, for both comments!  I'm really glad that there's a good response for Pam/Ryan. :)  

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