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Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2008 07:45 pm Title: On A Cusp

Another great chapter!

"It was a kiss that knew there would be a tomorrow." Very nice line. I really like that.

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Iheartstanley Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2008 08:35 am Title: We Should Kill Time

ooOOO this looks like a nice fluff piece.

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2008 06:39 am Title: We Should Kill Time

I love it! I always find that writing Jim's pranks is one of the hardest things (TWSS), so I love how quick-witted you make him here. The banter is perfect, and the voices are exactly in-character. Love it!

Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 21, 2008 06:35 am Title: We Should Kill Time

Great story! Your characterizations are spot on. I really thought he'd convince Michael to have Pam deliver the manual to him personally in NYC, though. :)

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