1 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2020 05:10 pm Title: The Merger
I absolutely love this because it seems so plausible and so very THEM that they would be brought back together by the games that always bound them in the first place.
10 [Report This]Date: September 25, 2008 08:25 pm Title: The Merger
Delicious.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you!
Date: September 24, 2008 08:43 pm Title: The Merger
Fact: Premise for the entire fic is awesome :)
I like the way you've made them completely separate scenarios. Um, nothing terribly interesting to add except I love it and Jim and Pam are adorable.
Author's Response: Fact. I really appreciate your kind review! :) Thank you so much. More coming soon!
Date: September 24, 2008 02:23 pm Title: The Merger
The interaction between Jim and Pam was filled with just right amount of drama, anger and sadness. I love a good "fight" scene, especially one that is written well.
Author's Response: The fight was a lot of fun to write. I had so much more I thought of for them to say to each other in this, but when I sat down to write it, it just flowed the way it did. Thanks so much for your kind reviews!
Date: September 23, 2008 05:36 pm Title: The Merger
Did not see the 'jinx' coming! I love this idea... so many ways they could've just passed through all the silliness! What's next? :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I get that they need to go through the silliness, that she needed time to live her life on her own a bit, that he needed to grow up a bit too... but I still say S3 makes me crazy! Not sure what's next, gotta keep plowing through the DVDs!
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2008 05:00 pm Title: The Merger
Oh...my...God. That was awesome! That last paragraph just had my heart skipping!
Author's Response: I love when she skips after him during the original Jinx scene. It was just so cute and I think really gave her true feelings away, even if she didn't know it herself. Thanks for the kind words!
Date: September 23, 2008 03:59 pm Title: The Merger
I really like this idea you have! And the jinx was so unexpected for me in this chapter. Love the last two paragraphs, especially. I hope you think of lots more missed chances to write about!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Next one is "The Return" and should be up in a few days at the latest.