Reviews For Dorothy Parker Drank Here
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 
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Date: October 28, 2008 07:23 pm Title: Interior: Pam
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I always try to find a way to play with words/lines if I can.
8 [Report This]Date: October 28, 2008 07:23 pm Title: Interior: Pam
Another great poem, another great chapter.
"I can't marry him," Pam chokes out between sobs. "He isn't... I don't... I can't! I can't."
I like the different spin you put on Pam's "I can't."
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I always try to find a way to play with words/lines if I can.
Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2008 11:09 am Title: Interior: Pam
Author's Response: Yeah, I might do well to just rename it The Den of Angst, haha. I'm happy that you're enjoying it. :)
Date: October 07, 2008 11:09 am Title: Interior: Pam
Poor Pam. So heartbreaking (although it's easier to read knowing that she is now so very happy).
Standouts for me:
...like she's wrapped in a cloud that's had the fluff beaten out of it. Great imagery.
And this: They fall like lonely, fat soldiers and surrender without regard onto the front of the wedding dress.
Really enjoying this, carbondalien, angst and all.
Author's Response: Yeah, I might do well to just rename it The Den of Angst, haha. I'm happy that you're enjoying it. :)