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Reviewer: JamFan4 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2009 08:56 pm Title: After Spanish Proverb: Jim

yeah, I almost cried when he threw away the yogurt lid. I guess I'm sad that way.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2008 08:23 pm Title: After Spanish Proverb: Jim

No time to give a proper review tonight but I did want to let you know I read Jim's chapter and enjoyed it, as always.

This was definitely the line with the most pathos for me:

He gingerly removes the necklace from around the lamp and slips it over his head. It doesn't feel the same as it did that day. He doesn't feel like a winner.



Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm glad you're liking these.

Reviewer: katiej Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02, 2008 07:03 am Title: After Spanish Proverb: Jim

I'm glad you were in need of some writing therapy--this is by far my favorite one. You captured Jim so well: He gingerly removes the necklace from around the lamp and slips it over his head. It doesn't feel the same as it did that day. He doesn't feel like a winner.

wow.



Author's Response: Writing this did help me a little bit. I'll probably be writing a lot in the next few days. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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