9 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2009 03:10 pm Title: I.
WOW. you make the words flow so beautifully. bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I really appreciate it!
8 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 07:15 pm Title: I.
"And no matter how much she tries to convince herself that she focuses on him because there is nothing else, she knows, deep down in the ache of a midnight cry, that he’s the only thing worth making a dream about."
"Maybe, if she tried a little harder, she could replace all the if’s in her life with a reason as to why she is wasting her life dreaming of someone who doesn’t dream of her. "
I don't want to be repetitive and quote the same passages as the first 2 reviewers - but I can't help it. They were both so beautifully written and make me wonder how poor Pam ever survived S3.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love to hear that my writing has the same affect on multiple people. I wonder about how Pam survived, too, and that's why I write about it! rnThanks so, so much!
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 09:48 am Title: I.
Wow. I really like your writing style. You capture Pam's angst so well. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!rnPart II. is in the process of being written (specifically 1/2 done). rnTHANKS AGAIN!
Date: October 12, 2008 09:13 am Title: I.
There's so many great things about this first chapter. You've gotten me so involved in their world already. There are many great lines here, but the two that grabbed me the most were the last one, and this one:
And no matter how much she tries to convince herself that she focuses on him because there is nothing else, she knows, deep down in the ache of a midnight cry, that he's the only thing worth making a dream about. Guh!!! So, so good.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!! I'm thrilled to hear that you're involved! And I love that line, too. I spent a lot of the time on the "ache of a midnight cry" thing because I needed something with a punch! Thanks again!!!rnPart II is on the way! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2008 10:22 pm Title: I.
Maybe, if she tried a little harder, she could replace all the if’s in her life with a reason as to why she is wasting her life dreaming of someone who doesn’t dream of her.
This line broke my heart. Oh, Pam. :( Beautiful job, Dwangie, as usual.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so, so much!!