Date: December 06, 2008 05:17 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
This is seriously awesome! I love how you've captured Stacy and Clinton just as well as the Office gang. Nicely done! I can't wait to read the rest and really wish I wasn't running off to dinner with a friend right now. Though that will be fun too I suppose.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you like it, and that you'll enjoy the rest!! :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 03:38 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
What a great story! I haven't been reading much fic lately, but this one is so much fun! Keep it up -- I'm anxious to see her new style (and I hope it's bolder than her actual style on the show!).
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad this is helping to fulfill that need for humor and entertainment. :) I can't give away too much of how Pam will look in the end, but I hope for it to be a nice medium between what we've seen her wear on the show and the really trendy pieces Stacy and Clinton would put her in. That's my goal, anyway. Thanks again!!
8 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2008 06:20 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
Fun, fun, fun! Can't wait to see how you pull off this transformation without having pictures to rely on. Quite the task, DA-S, but I know you're up to it. Oh, and I can just picture the "pilgrim shoes." I always found them to be particularly heinous :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I completely forgot about the possibility of using pictures!! I may have to add some links at the end of each chapter from now on, and maybe go back an add some to chapter 2 as well. Thanks for the suggestion!
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2008 10:38 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
:) I feel like I'm watching an episode of What Not to Wear. So glad the Pilgrim shoes were brought up. God, they were hideous! No worries, your format is easy to follow and I am truly enjoying this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the format is easy to follow. I figured anyone who's seen What Not To Wear would recognize the format, so it's great that you think it feels like a real episode. And yes, those shoes are a definite crime against fashion. :P Thanks again!!!
Date: November 03, 2008 06:27 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
Wow...I am amazed, Dundie All-Star! I'm really loving this story!
I love that Jim and Pam are dating behind all of this, I'd love to see more of that secretness (is that the right word?). I love the hidden glances between the two of them.
I would really love to see a behind the scenes dialogue between the two of them...some fluff, perhaps?
Sorry...I'm having some JAM withdrawals. I'm trying to get all I can... :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you're enjoying the few secretive hints at Jim and Pam's relationship. I definitely hope to work in more, but it's difficult when Pam goes to New York to shop. (Hm, Pam in New York, sounds familiar.) I'll do my best for ya though! Thanks again!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2008 04:48 am Title: ACT I: The Ambush
I like the style of the story. I'm assuming it's the way it's done in the actual program "What Not To Wear" - I've never actually seen it.
I was worried Pam might be offended Jim and co think she needs to improve her wardrobe but she took it well. Looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! yeah I tried to follow the format of What Not To Wear so it would feel like an actual episode. Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: November 02, 2008 07:42 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
I. Am. So. Excited.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad. :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2008 07:10 pm Title: ACT I: The Ambush
I LOVE THIS!!! God, you so got Clinton and Stacy's snark just right, even the differences between their voices. And Pam? Perfect. I love that this ishow she got her EPIC WARDROBE CHANGE...this is absolutely going to be part of TO canon for me, babe. This is absolutely perfect and I CAN'T WAIT for more!!!
Author's Response: Oh yay! Thank you so much!! I wonder if I've just watched so much WNTW that I just know their voices (not unlike how I know the characters of TO). I'm so flattered that this is going to be one of the classics already! Hopefully it'll be right on par with your Disney story (although nothing outdoes the Disney story). Thanks again!!