Date: December 06, 2008 05:26 pm Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules
Okay, I couldn't resist, so I read one more chapter. But now I really do have to go to dinner. Can't wait to finish this. Your Stacy and Clinton are still spot on! :)
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you think this is entertaining enough to keep reading in a hurry! Glad you like Stacy and Clinton too; they are so fun to write!! Thanks again!!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 02:58 pm Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules
WHEE!
Don't forget the little talking heads that the WNTW contestants do in their hotel rooms!
I'm loving the pictures. Your Stacey and Clinton dialogue is great! Here are some of my favourite fashion words, just in case: Classic, Neutrals, Kitten heels, embellishment, etc.
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it, especially the pictures and the Stacy and Clinton dialogue. They are very fun to write. I'll definitely try to incorporate some of your words too. Thanks again!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2008 07:03 am Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules
BONJOUR INDEED! God, I love the bonjour.
This is getting more fantastic-er by the sentence, miss. I'll admit that I had reservations about how this would read, and what a fool I am. It's wunderbar! (I know your love for me using that word.) You could always write Pam, but the fact that - as I said in chapter two - Clinton and Stacy are so damn perfect is just the best. I can't get over how much I adoooooore this story.
And face it, kiddo, no matter how many bitchy days you or I may have, we're a team. (And we both know my days outnumber yours to the nth degree.) ;)
Author's Response: LOL!! I love the bonjour too! Somehow I knew you'd love that. (Using foreign language words are fun!!) I'm so glad you're enjoying Stacy and Clinton. Really, they are so fun to write it should be a crime. Glad you think I'm doing a good job with Pam too. Thanks so much for sticking with me on this!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 10:47 pm Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules
That was a great idea to add the photos! Believe it or not, Pam had much uglier shoes than what you've shown. Take a look at the shoes she wears in Safety Training. *shudders* I'm still loving this. You're doing a great job with it. I can't wait for Pam to meet Nick!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I know, her shoes near the end of season 3 were much worse, but sadly I couldn't find any good screencaps of them! The ones from Initiation are kind of similar though, so I had to settle with those. I'm so glad you're enjoying this and are excited for more!!
8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 06:42 pm Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules
LOVE the visuals! This story is such fun. If I were Pam, I would just die if I had to replace all of my clothes because someone got rid of them! Not to mention how insecure I would feel to have someone examine me so closely. Yikes! Your Pam is a real sport. Can't wait to see how she makes out shopping. Oh--loved the talk about her "secret boyfriend!"
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, my Pam is a trooper. I picture her as a little unsure, but since she's so used to cameras and all of that then she wouldn't be too uncomfortable. I just figure if she can walk on hot coals then she can handle Stacy and Clinton. ;) Glad you're enjoying it, and thanks again for the suggestion of the visuals!!
Date: November 10, 2008 03:48 pm Title: ACT II: Learning The Rules
You've really captured Stacy's and Clinton's voices perfectly, along with the whole feel of WNTW! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! Stacy and Clinton are really fun to write. So snarky! Glad you're enjoying it!