Date: February 09, 2008 04:33 pm Title: Chrissy
Heehee. That was such a cute little story. Thanks for sharing. =)
9 [Report This]Date: June 24, 2007 02:04 pm Title: Chrissy
I love this story!!!
"Levi keeps talking about how he has a girlfriend in Canada, and I don't think she's real!"
Ha ha ha ha!!! Definitely sounds like one of Michael's boys.
I like how you keep switching up the point of views, and I love how this one is told from Chrissy's. I can definitely see the wheels turning in this eleven year olds mind. And she seems to have quite an imagination. You can definitely see why Patrick is enamored with her. And of course, she would be a little spit-fire that is going to give Angela and Dwight their more than fair share of headaches in the future. But that's only because she's the perfect combination of the two. Excellent character development.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I really like these characters, and I'm trying to brainstorm another story. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: June 16, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chrissy
Oh, I loooved these last two chapters! Pam and the "Teasing means I love you," thing, and then Angela and Dwight as weird but ultimately loving parents...this has been delightful from beginning to end.
Author's Response: Thnaks so much! I had way too much fun writing it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: June 15, 2007 06:15 am Title: Chrissy
that last line is SO sweet :) i had forgotten about this, but i'm really glad you updated. This is SUCH a funny concept and you write it REALLY well. Angela would definitely be that kind of mom!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm gald you liked it! It was really fun to write, perhaps I'll have to do a sequel!
8 [Report This]Date: June 15, 2007 05:42 am Title: Chrissy
I like that Angela seems in way over her head with girls rather than boys. Fun story. I hope we see more soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think Angela would have a really hard time with girls, so that's why I gave her so many :-)
Date: June 15, 2007 05:30 am Title: Chrissy
Wow, I never thought I'd see this story again! Yay! Oh, and MAJOR props, like, you win at life props, for the Avenue Q shout out!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for not finishing it waaay earlier, but thanks for the review! I also suck horribly, because though I am a theatre dork, I don't know Avenue Q very well, and so I don't know what the reference is!
Date: June 14, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chrissy
Awww, this entire story was just too cute. I love that ending!
Author's Response: yay, I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
Date: June 14, 2007 05:20 pm Title: Chrissy
Aww that end part was cute! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!
Date: June 14, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Chrissy
Chrissy likes the DaVinci Code. Angela would so burn it. Although, is it bad that a ten year old has that book, when I haven't even seen the MOVIE?
The logic of don't tell means its wrong. I get told this all the time. Little three year old "Don't tell mommy!!! No! Don't tell mommy!" "Does that mean you aren't supposed to do _____?" "No I can, just don't tell mommy!" "Why can't I tell her if you can do it?" "cause she'll be angry" "Then your not supposed to do it." usually followed by yelling and crying. And then distraction by something like gum.
Such an enjoyable story!
Author's Response: Skip the movie, just read the book, it's a fun adventure story. I love kid logic, it's so fantastic and fun to write.