Date: February 09, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Laura
Hahahaha so cute!
Date: June 09, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Laura
I just found this and I laughed all the way through. It would be great if you continued, but I loved how you ended it.
Author's Response: Thnaks for the review, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: March 17, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Laura
I love it! So funny, and sweet. More, please?
Author's Response: I'm on it...circumstances piled up and I pushed it aside, but it's on its way!
Date: September 27, 2006 01:06 pm Title: Laura
oh my gosh i love this.
the "check" on the note. ahaha. do you like me? check yes or check no.
i can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Ah, yes...the note. I totally did this when I was 16, which isn't nearly as cute as when you're 10.
Glad you liked it!
Date: September 27, 2006 04:47 am Title: Laura
HA! I can so see Dwight running in like a loon. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: I love Dwight! I'm excited to write the next chapter in which he goes nutty!
Aw, I'm glad you love it, I'm a huge fan of yours.
7 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 10:58 pm Title: Laura
Love the last line!! It's so very Dwight-esque, lol.
Author's Response: Dwight just walks off the page. He rocks. I love him.
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 10:03 pm Title: Laura
Oh, Oh too funny! It's so excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm writing the next chapter, stay tuned!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 09:45 pm Title: Laura
Dwight K. Schrute to brandish a paper in her face and accuse her of aiding a juvenile delinquent who was after his child.
This mental picture? Priceless. And Chriselda? And the four sisters? It's all perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks! Dwight sort of writes himself. I love him!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 06:49 pm Title: Laura
Hee! This was adorable--love the little details of their family lives that come out and particularly love the last line :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I like coming up with ways to describe their lives without blatantly doing so. I'm loving writing these people!
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 06:30 pm Title: Laura
Heee. Wonderful beginning. And "Chriselda"? The perfect name for a Dwangela spawn.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chriselda means 'strong, ready for battle', which seems like a Dwight choice. All the sisters have names that mean something like that, so Dwight can have his own army.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:54 pm Title: Laura
This was so funny! It figures that Dwight would name his daughter Chriselda and that she'd wear a "Soliders for Jesus" camo. shirt! Very well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I LOVE imagining what Chrissy would be like, as the spawn of Dwangela. She'd rock!
Date: September 26, 2006 04:40 pm Title: Laura
Oooh! Please continue! I have to know what Dwight will do next...
Author's Response:
I'm writing the second chapter right now, with lots of Dwight!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:38 pm Title: Laura
Great start! I'm looking forward to more of this!
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming (TWSS) soon!
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:30 pm Title: Laura
Excellent! Love that Chrissy has four little sisters to Patrick's one, and the image of Patrick checking the box on the note. And, of course, Dwight ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I love the thought of Angela having five girls instead of her pair of well behaved boys!
6 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:28 pm Title: Laura
Very funny. Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, they're like crack...