Date: November 16, 2008 08:28 pm Title: That Guy
This was SO GOOD! I heart this couple. I loved how Pam reacted to the idea of a terrace. Funny how cute boys want to buy houses for their girls, huh? :)
Great story Ma..I mean, JAMHands!
Date: November 12, 2008 09:51 am Title: That Guy
Second reading. Can't remember if I reviewed the first time. Calling DW was an excellent idea, their scene in this seems dead on to me. First time I've seen the idea of Jim initiating a backup plan, and you wrote a great story. And there's another chapter now I see! Yay! :)
Date: November 11, 2008 05:50 pm Title: That Guy
So Sweet. Jim will really do anything for Pam.
Date: November 11, 2008 06:39 am Title: That Guy
Wow, you write some of the best Jim dialogue out there, and you throw in his body language as well. I simply loved this.
Excellent job.
Date: November 10, 2008 03:10 pm Title: That Guy
Very well written. I wish this is what would happen on the show, but I'm sure they'll be giving us more drama first.
Date: November 09, 2008 11:35 am Title: That Guy
Keep going!
9 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2008 06:09 am Title: That Guy
As much as I love both Jim and Pam in Scranton, this is what I would want to happen if the other option is to break them up. I think that this is great! Definately continue (and maybe forward it to the Office writers)!!!!!
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 11:43 pm Title: That Guy
Great! I like this solution to the NY/Scranton problem.
Date: November 08, 2008 07:57 pm Title: That Guy
No time for a proper review tonight but I'll add my vote to the others that I'm sure are there already. You should definitely continue!
Date: November 08, 2008 07:06 pm Title: That Guy
This is fabulous. I really liked that Jim took the initiative to see if it was possible to make things work for Pam,even though I think she's going to want to come home. I'd love to read more, please continue.
(I so love David Wallace.)
Date: November 08, 2008 06:19 pm Title: That Guy
Oh this is very nice. I especially loved the scene with David Wallace -- I think you really nailed his voice. Can't wait to see where you take this.
Date: November 08, 2008 05:02 pm Title: That Guy
yay! more please. I want to see Jim and his parents.
Date: November 08, 2008 03:36 pm Title: That Guy
Really great. That Jim always seems to think of Pam first and foremost. Please keep going!
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 03:31 pm Title: That Guy
I hope you continue with it too. I think Jim getting a job in NY would be the perfect solution for the pair...but I hope that's not what happens on the show, as it would be ruined if JAM was taken out of the office
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 02:00 pm Title: That Guy
I hope that you continue with this, JAMhands. I really enjoy your style. Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! You just made my day.
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 11:49 am Title: That Guy
Love it. Can't wait to see where it goes. I like to see Jim pro-active, but it's so typically him to make all these plans without talking to Pam. Very interesting.
Author's Response: Yes, Jim's propensity to forge ahead troubled me a little. We should see it addressed soon! Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 11:25 am Title: That Guy
Great! I think you really found a realistic way to capture Jim's feelings after the Alex-intervention. Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I really appreciate it!
Date: November 08, 2008 11:03 am Title: That Guy
This was fabulous!
I, too, was thinking of Jim's return to Scranton for Pam when Pam said, "But Jim is in Scranton". I love how you had Jim be so proactive in this story.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love a little grab the bull by the horns Jim. So glad that you liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2008 10:59 am Title: That Guy
First, definitely continue this. I'd love to see where you're taking it.
He leaned forward, propping one elbow on his desk as he ducked his head and said in a low voice, “Not now, okay? Not here, please.” < SO Jim, I could really see this.
I love how he went to see David Wallace, and that he'd do anything to make Pam happy aw.
continue-continue-continue-continue-continue
Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! The next chapter is already nagging at me. Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know that you liked it!