10 [Report This]Date: January 06, 2009 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
The suspense is killing me (in a good way)!
Author's Response: Great - that means I'm going my job. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2008 10:51 am Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
Jim is going to be out of his mind with worry for Pam. I hope this psycho leaves her alone. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story so far!! :)
Author's Response: Yes, Jim will worry but he'll also do some figuring. He's a smart guy, afterall.rnrnThanks for the review, very much appreciated!
Date: November 12, 2008 05:20 am Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
This is great! The suspense is palpable.
Author's Response: Thanks katiej. I'm glad you're enjoying it and I appreciate your comments.
Date: November 11, 2008 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
I love this! As always your writing is great. It's very suspenseful and has me speculating all sorts of crazy things about Ryan and Alex.
I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you lpy4704, I'm glad you're speculating, that makes the writing more fun.rnI really appreciate the feedback!
Date: November 10, 2008 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
OMG, you have to get it done NOW! lol. This has seriously got me on the edge of my seat. You really know how to up your stakes. Love it!....and Ryan - ICK.
Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool. I hope to get it done in a couple of days, it's not a long story (as soon as I can get a few real life things attended to)rnrnYeah Ryan is always just -ICK. The question is, how ICK?rnrnYour review is very appreciated!
Date: November 10, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
Oh...I am intrigued! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks Jinxcoke, I'm glad you're intrigued. I've got a few "real life" things to attend to for a couple of days, and then I'll finish it. I want to see what happens. *snort*rnrnI really appreciate the review.
8 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2008 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
What a nice surprise, jazzfan! First off, love the song that I'm assuming the title references. I like this--very suspenseful. I feel nervous! That Ryan is such a little dick. Grrr.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: You should feel nervous. I'm also glad you like the song. The second chapter song is actually quite nice too, it's from "Sweeney Todd". *grin*rnrnThanks a bunch for the review, NanReg.
Date: November 10, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2 Not While I'm Around
I have a theory... it's alex right?? cause he was close by? wow, im addicted!
Author's Response: Mwahahahahaha. <-- Evil laugh. You'll have to read and find out. (I don't have a long story planned)rnrnSeriously, thanks for the review Beaky22. rn