Date: March 05, 2007 11:09 pm Title: The Pit
he leaned back against the cold stone wall, and pulled out his phone. Concentrating very hard, Jim sent a text message to the last person he ever thought he would.
Help. The Pit. NYC.
A few moments later, he sent a second one, just in case.
6 fingers
OH MAN! Way to follow the book plot! I was like how's Nomad going to get Inigo Montoya/Dwight to go to Stamford? niiiiiiiice!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: October 14, 2006 05:35 am Title: The Pit
Heeeee. I came back to review this because I was in too much of a hurry to read the next chapter. Anyway...the nightmare sequence is wonderful. Of course it would be Phyllis to call her out like that. Gorgeous!
Author's Response: Thanks! I knew from the start that Phyllis would defend True Love ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 10:45 pm Title: The Pit
Yes! I just keep loving everything about this! And the dream totally fooled me--I can't believe I forgot about that part of the movie! I think I need to watch it again. :-)
Author's Response: Yes! Watch it again! I find once a year is necessary :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 08:59 pm Title: The Pit
Poor Jim drunk off his butt! He needs to be rescued from his slumber.
This made laugh so much:
"Ewwwwwww! Nooooo, Grandpa, you've got it all wrong! Pam doesn't kiss Packer."
"Why not?"
"Because! She kisses Jim! After everything he did, if she kissed Packer, it wouldn't be fair!"
You have the grandfather and the grandkid down so well. :)Author's Response: Thanks, Gen - they are so fun to write. And yes, poor devastated Jim ;(
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 07:36 pm Title: The Pit
I can't wait for the next chapter. Dwight to the rescue!
Author's Response: Thanks, Leely :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 07:16 pm Title: The Pit
i like to think of Karen as the albino. *giggles* i can't wait for dwight to come to jim's rescue :)
Author's Response: That's exactly who she was meant to be ;) Thanks, janelle!
Date: October 13, 2006 06:55 pm Title: The Pit
This is great, great, beyond great.
p.s. thanks for throwing IC in there
Author's Response: Heh, that was Andy calling IC students geeks, not me (in case you attended)! Thanks, NightsInAugust ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:36 pm Title: The Pit
ah! so intense, please post the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: It's up, and the finale soon. Thanks, Rebecca!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:28 pm Title: The Pit
I love you. Six fingers. Oh my God.
Oh, and thank you for mentioning Karen, and making her decent, but still not ZOMGJimLovesHer!-ish.
Stupid JimandPamandToddandAndy. Grr.
I'd say more but I want to read this again. =P
Author's Response: Thanks, moofoot!
Author's Response: ETA: I used Karen as we saw her in the season 3 premiere, before the flirty stuff. Can have Jim getting distracted!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:27 pm Title: The Pit
More lovely work. So funny and charming. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:25 pm Title: The Pit
Dwight to the rescuuuuue!!!
I loved Phyllis as the Hectoring Woman. And Andy as the Albino. Hell, I love everything about this.
Look for a shout-out in the "Grief Counseling" thread soon. ;)
Author's Response: Ah, but Karen was the Albino ;) Yay for the shout-out! Thanks, Beth ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:24 pm Title: The Pit
shan, this was just pitch perfect, as usual! I love that the Pit of Despair is a bar. Oh, aren't they always? ;)
Author's Response: It was between a bar and Andy's basement. I figured Jim was more likely to go to a bar. Thanks, pennylane!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:11 pm Title: The Pit
Oh! He texted Dwight, didn't he? Tell me it's Dwight. Wait, no, don't tell me..
Author's Response: OK, I won't ;) Thanks, Pixel!
10 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2006 06:10 pm Title: The Pit
Yay Shan! I need to tell you I love you for the following reasons: 1) I am no longer feeling pathetic staying in tonight and doing laundry 2) You had Andy take Jim to The City.
My evening suddenly has purpose. I'm on my way to rescue him now - if Dwight doesn't find him first. :)
All kidding aside - I have to admit my favorite-est parts still continue to be those involving Grandpa. So perfect!
Author's Response:
Yay! Glad you're still liking the Grandpa bits - some folks think they break the story too much, but I really don't have many more than the movie does (maybe 2).
Did you find Jim before Dwight? ;)