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Reviewer: Muggins Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 11:04 pm Title: The Perils

In front of him, Andy chuckled into his phone, and said, "Sure thing," before hanging up. He clicked around online a few times, then turned to Jim.

"Hey, Big Tuna. Can I interest you in a friendly match?"

Jim looked up, confused. "What?"

Andy rolled his chair back so Jim could see Andy's monitor. VirtualSwordfight.com. Andy's avatar bounced while it waited.

Jim sighed. "Sure. What the hell." He logged in and their match screen came up. Something caught his eye. "Huh."

For crying out loud! I knew it was coming and I still got chills! How do you do that????

 

 

 



Author's Response: Yay! Glad it worked!

Reviewer: ella eternity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 04:01 pm Title: The Perils

PBeesly: But what about the ROUS?

JHalpert: The Regional Office Undercover Spyware? Yeah, right.

 

 

 

oh my gosh.  i can't beleived you worked that in.  i love the princess bride, and the fact that you worked in ROUS's..well, you're a genius.  Bravo.



Author's Response: Thanks, ella!

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 08:35 am Title: The Perils

Yay! The ROUS, that's what I was waiting for! And Roy as the lightning sand? Guh. You are seriously a freakin genius to make this all work. Totally believable. I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, pennylane, glad the ROUS lived up to expectations!

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 07:58 pm Title: The Perils

Wow.

Andy's the six fingered man. Roy's the lightning sand. Angela's the flame spurt. Genius. Genius.

Can't wait to see what you do with the pit of despair.



Author's Response: Thanks, Shan - no pressure!  ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 06:28 pm Title: The Perils

I keep being amazed at how you were able to tie in the different elements.  What a challenge, but you are up to the task. :)  I can't wait to see the clergyman with a lisp show up. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, Gen :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:39 pm Title: The Perils

Pam felt herself slip just a bit into his dimples.

Watch out, Pam!  It's the Lightening Sand!!! 

 You are a very talented lady, missy!



Author's Response: Thanks, Beth :)  Lightning Sand, indeed!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 04:02 pm Title: The Perils

Aw, so great.  This just gets better and better.  Great job with the IMs.

Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill :)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 03:55 pm Title: The Perils

This just keeps getting better and better!  You are such an awesome author!

Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar!  And loads of credit to William Goldman - it was his story first ;)

Reviewer: rebecca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 03:17 pm Title: The Perils

this is sooo good! jees, i keep replying like this, i need to get more creative. but seriously, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks, rebecca ;)

Reviewer: Pixel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:59 pm Title: The Perils

So much fun, Shan!  I love it.


Author's Response:

Awesome, thanks, Pixel ;)

Reviewer: Kittykat47 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:30 pm Title: The Perils

Oh. My. God.  This is sooo good!  I know this isn't much of a review but I just have to say how impressed I am with this parody!  Bravo (and please keep it coming!)

Author's Response: Thanks, Kittykat47 :)  More soon...

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:05 pm Title: The Perils

wow, i can't believe how well you're relating this to the movie! andy as count rugen= :D

Author's Response: Thanks, janelle!  Andy's crazy enough, don't you think? ;)

Reviewer: Leely Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:03 pm Title: The Perils

In retrospect, they probably shouldn't have shown up at the office together at 5:00 a.m. That had looked kind of suspicious.

I laughed out loud at that line.  Also, it took me far too long to understand where you were going with the "three perils" - but when it clicked, I laughed out loud again.



Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't use the words "fire swamp" believably, so I just kind of hoped people would get what was happening in this chapter. Glad you did! Thanks :)

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 02:00 pm Title: The Perils

Oh, awesome. I love this more and more with every chapter.

This: MGScott: O RLY? made me laugh so hard that my eyes were tearing up. I pictured the o rly owl, and I just couldn't hold it together.

Amazing.



Author's Response:

Yay, glad it's still entertaining six chapters in!

And, yeah, Michael would be all over the lingo ;)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 01:39 pm Title: The Perils

OK.  Are you kidding me??  Andy as Count Rugen? 

Shan.  Seriously.  Your brilliance knows no bounds....



Author's Response: Hee! I did a little dance when I figured out he was the perfect person to keep Jim occupied for a while. Thanks, Krissy ;)

Reviewer: girl7 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 01:32 pm Title: The Perils

This was as awesome as I knew it'd be.  And this? "

"Supply closet, New Year's Party, 2002. Whew. Feels good to finally tell you that."

"Thanks a lot! Ew."

 Totally awesome.  I bow to you yet again!



Author's Response: Thanks, girl7! Glad you liked that exchange :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 01:27 pm Title: The Perils

You are a genius. Like, a parody savant. You figured out a way to get the ROUS in here? And in a way that makes sense? And...Andy is the six-fingered man? Oh, this is so brilliant.  I'm feverish, but I think I'm coherent enough to be blown away.



Author's Response: Thanks, Lis! Hope you feel better soon. I've been looking forward to unveiling Andy - he's going to be fun ;)

Author's Response: And "parody savant" is totally going on my resumé, followed by "Lis said so."

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