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Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:19 am Title: The Awful Contest

Seriously, I am just in love with this story already. I rewatched The Princess Bride yesterday for the gajillionth time in honor of it. Jim as a pirate is all kinds of hot. Also kind of curious if you're going to work the R.O.U.S's into it ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! That's great that you rewatched it ;)  I'm still trying to figure out the fire swamp sequence - should have at least some metaphorical ROUSs.

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:25 pm Title: The Awful Contest

this just gets bettter and better... go dprobarts! :)

and the way micheal messes up vizzini's line is hilarous



Author's Response: Thanks, janelle :)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:17 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Too, too good.  I really love it.  Get moving on the next chapter!  ;-)


Author's Response: Right away!  Thanks, time4moxie  ;)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 11:29 am Title: The Awful Contest

Love, love, love it!!!!  So excited and can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill - more soon ;)

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 10:34 am Title: The Awful Contest

"Yes. It's long and lightweight and perfectly balanced for my character's build..."
I hope that was a purposeful TWSS moment!
I adored "Inconceptable!" and am looooving the story so far.



Author's Response: Haha!  Nope, that was unintentional. Hee, thanks, McGigi  ;)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:17 am Title: The Awful Contest

My local video store doesn't have The Princess Bride. How wrong is that? Anyway, enjoyed the chapter. Now who could DPRoberts be...?

Author's Response: They don't have Princess Bride?!  That is wrong, wrong, wrong.  ;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:13 am Title: The Awful Contest

The parallels are definitely becoming clearer! "Inconceptable!" DPRoberts! Hee. It's amazing how well this translates.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm kinda surprised nobody's done this yet to this extent.  Thanks, Semby!  ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:01 am Title: The Awful Contest

Oh, wow. In honor of your fic, I actually just re-read "The Princess Bride" and this is killing me. You're so fabulous.

Author's Response: Wow, that's awesome, Lis!  You'll probably find this fic follows the movie closer than the book, but they're pretty similar anyway.

Reviewer: rebecca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 07:24 am Title: The Awful Contest

oh, this is so exciting i can't wait to see what happens next.  i love how you've managed to adapt this to the princess bride story good job!



Author's Response: Thanks, rebecca!  I'll try not to keep you in suspense too much longer ;)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 05:29 am Title: The Awful Contest

Shan.  This is beyond brilliant.  I am adoring every morsel of this story. 

I tend to reveiw things as awesome all the time and though I always do mean it - this time I mean it - times 10. 

Truly amazing job.



Author's Response: *yay*  Thanks, Krissy ;) That's just an awesome thing to say!

Reviewer: tonightyourghost Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 11:38 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Hee! This is great. I'm doing the mental comparisons in my mind. I love that Michael keeps saying "inconceptable." What a fun fic! Yeah.... basically awesome. The thought of Jim crossed with the Dread Pirate Roberts did something squiggly to my insides. Only, more fun than that sounds. 

Author's Response: Oh, no, squiggly insides sounds good! Glad you like it, tonightyourghost :)

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 10:52 pm Title: The Awful Contest

"Inconceptable."

Wow. Just...

Genius. You are so effing smart. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Whoa, thanks, Shan ;)

Reviewer: DementedRiku Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 10:48 pm Title: The Awful Contest

OMG this is so exciting! lol can't wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response: Good! Thanks, DementedRiku :)

Reviewer: Rose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:51 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Genius.

That's all I have to say.



Author's Response: Wow, thanks, Rose ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:22 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Okay, the fact that Michael can't say inconceivable had me giggling for a long, long time.  And Packer as Prince Humperdinck!  Awesome!

Author's Response: That's great - thanks, Gen ;)  And Packer... ew.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:14 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Loved that chapter.  Pam up for bids, wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona :)

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:03 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Inconceptable!

Hahahahaha! Love it. That and the shredding macheels. Love this story. I have such a desire to watch the movie now. 

Can't wait for the virtual sword match. Hee. Fabulous job.



Author's Response:

Thanks, TV_Buffy!  The sword match should be fun ;)

Reviewer: GreenEyes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:01 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Just...ahh. This story is outrageously cute already, and I'm kind of obsessed with it and you. =) I just love the pacing and the tone and the little interjections of grandpa and granddaughter talking...you are a wonderful writer! Keep it coming!



Author's Response: Awesome, thanks, GreenEyes!  :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:43 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Inconceptable.

Hee!  And the Shrieking E... er, Shredding Machine!  

Lovin' this! 



Author's Response: Yay! I'm counting on you to get all of the parallels! Thanks, Beth ;)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 05:34 pm Title: Once upon a time...

I just love the interaction between the grandpa and his granddaughter - it adds such a sweet element to the story. And the line "sneaky kind of pretty" was brillant! (and how sweet that your husband left you a review and said the same thing about you.....awwwww.)

Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar!  And, yeah, Dave rocks ;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 12:19 pm Title: Once upon a time...

He would just do what she asked and smile, and say, simply,

"As you wish."

And each time, Pam wondered if maybe she had the wrong boyfriend.

 Awww! That was the bit that convinced me I'm going to love this story.



Author's Response: Great! Thanks, Semby ;)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 07:24 pm Title: Once upon a time...

By the time she got tricked into Michael's awful contest, Pam had decided that Jim was gone for good.

Ooooo!!!  You tease, you!

*Sigh*  Jim just makes the bestest Wesley. I am loving this!



Author's Response: Heehee! And he does, doesn't he? Now imagine him in that black pirate shirt. Did your head just explode?  Sweet dreams ;)

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 03:45 pm Title: Once upon a time...

Sadly, I barely remember the movie, but no matter...this stands on its own. Fun and lyrical and such a nice distraction. Like the rhythm of the language too.

Author's Response: Thanks, Colette! That means a lot ;)

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 03:37 pm Title: Once upon a time...

Oh, this is fabitty fab fab! It's so simple and beautiful...like Pam :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, McGigi!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 01:42 pm Title: Once upon a time...

Charming and sweet and magical.  Perfect!

Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill!  :)

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