Reviews For Becoming Hitler
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Reviewer: Yeza Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 03, 2023 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1

I like your story. You put a twist on what we saw on TV and made it work.
What I don't like is the Pam in this story. Disloyal, ungrateful and selfish. And I don't blame Alex for that. I blame her. As if Jim didn't give up too much, and she didn't know it.

Reviewer: framo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2009 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am loving this story, these are flawed characters and I've been itching to see them actually fight again. It's been a while, hasn't it? It looks like it will finally happen soon BUT this flippin' house should have been the catalyst but it didn't, and I love your reasoning behind it. I was also really taken with your comparison of the similar physicality of Alex and Roy.

I hope we get to see where Jim does say that she should do what she feels is right in New York because I always felt that was very important. It's what makes Jim different, he tries to be completely unselfish in the relationship and it sometimes backfires (he bought her a house in a big romantic gesture... stupid boy) but the fact that he wants her to achieve her dreams, the reason he stays at a crap job... it's easy to overlook it as his naivety or boring-ness. Pam's not totally a victim or the evil dictator.

I love seeing them fight but I like seeing both sides. Jim's not a buffoon, Pam's not evil. I don't know where I'm going with this but blahblahblah, I really like this story. Thank you for not falling into the fluffy trap of suckful Jam.

Author's Response: You'll never see any fluffy suckful Jam from me.  What you are going to see is KaPAM references wherever and whenever possible in the most oblique of circumstances.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, but it sounds so much cooler.


Author's Response: I've always liked Rindfleischetikettierungsüberwachungsaufgabenübertragungsgesetz.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2009 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

And if blitzkrieg doesn't work, you can always try my favorite German word, luftwaffe.


Author's Response: It's doubtful that the Luftwaffe would succeed where a blitzkrieg failed, since the Luftwaffe really had no heavy bombing capabilities.

Reviewer: cri-man-squa Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2009 03:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

I must say, your last line in combination with the chapter end note has given me quite a nasty case of the Laugh Out Louds. I'm morbidly curious what the title means and am off to read more.

Author's Response: The title is really a stretch.  You'll know it when you see it (it's in two chapters from now) but there is a greater meaning, which you would get if you read my fanfic "The Austrian Vagrant" and knew your World War 2 history.  I'll try to bring the funny, but this really is meant to be a more serious piece.  Well, than my usual stuff at least.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Little Comment Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2009 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh Alex...I'm so glad you're back. (This is ff.net's Bears Eat Beets, by the way...in case you were curious. You were. Admit it.) Hitler and Shatner all in one little package? Oh yeah, and those other two too? Fantastic.

Yeah. I'm on board.

Author's Response:

Not curious at all, actually.  I figured out your secret identity long ago.  Those glasses didn't fool me, Superman.

Reviewer: Liv Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2009 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1

I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response: Next update on Saturday.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2009 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Wert, I really love this...yet I'm afraid.  Any author who uses the word "Shatner-esque" earns my unwaivering attention.  Continue please?

Author's Response:

Well, if you know anything about me, and you do, then you should be afraid.  Be very afraid.  You know, I could... write... out ... theShatnerliketext... so that... you... could... all... experience... thejoyofShatner.

But I won't.  I do already have several other chapters of this ready though. 

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2009 01:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooooooooooh I likey like!!!

Author's Response: I thankey thank.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2009 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

aha!

I knew Alex was more of a douche that he was portrayed as (:

awesome fic, keep it up.

Author's Response: Awww, but he's not a douche.  He's a lovable, cuddly, teddy bear of a man, who's thoughtful and charming and fun to be around.  You'll see.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2009 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

... do you know if she likes to eat dinner early?  

Glad to see you haven't left us for a younger, cuter fandom.  Looking forward to more, but I'm not sure why...



Author's Response:

I have it on good authority that she eats dinner at 4:30pm.

You almost lost me to Hello Kitty, but you pulled me back with a plot idea.  You know why you're looking forward to more: it's because I'm the single greatest writer in the history of time, that's why!  Why are you laughing? 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2009 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love it.  I'm curious as to how the beginning part about the house fits into the rest, as well as to who "becomes Hitler."

Also, this is the first bit of fanfic I've read in months, so I guess you rate. ;)  



Author's Response:

All will be made clear, by dear TLK.  Eventually.  If my writing is up to the task.  And I stay on plot.  Which is difficult for me.  I'm not really sure how this really fits with the title though.  I usually have a hard time thinking of good titles,but I've always been a fan of Hitler, so here.

How can you have not read fanfic?  I mean, you.  I cannot understand. 

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