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Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02, 2017 08:48 am Title: Chapter 5

Alex plus pam. Disgusting. aint gonna happen1

Reviewer: Moogie Man Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2016 11:29 am Title: Chapter 5

Withouy making this a porn, you need some more details of their encounter

Reviewer: debbiebrown Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 16, 2009 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh, this is wonderful. Thanks. I love stories where Jim and Pam are actually flawed.

Creed on the front lawn? Priceless.

Author's Response:

They're hard to find, aren't they?

Not only Creed on the front lawn, but in the bushes.  Though I do wonder what happened to the original Creed Bratton.

Reviewer: Bayjb Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh no. I had a feeling it was building to this. Curious to see if they actually stop and Pam is guilty for something big or not.

Author's Response: I've had several people wonder where it went.  I had thought that the conversation with Angela would have been enough to explain it, but I guess it isn't (I usually like being subtle, expecting my readers to be able to draw the inferences that I lead them to, but some people have different thought processes than me - as any population should - and the connection is interpreted differently).  So I'll make it clearer in the next segment that it was big.  That's what she said.

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

ummmm, I do not think pam+alex= happened.

sorry, but still;;;
quite an interesting story (:

Author's Response:

Do you think that most of what is written in fanfic happened?  Do you make a point of letting the authors of those fics know that you do not think that what they wrote happened?  I'm pretty sure that you do not.  And why do you not?  Because those stories don't desecrate the Holy Jam.

I desecrate the Holy Jam because it needs to be desecrated.  Open your minds to the possibilities of The Office beyond just the resplendent love of Jim and Pam.  The world is full and rich beyond the cloistered prison of dogma and you restrict yourself and your earthly experience by closing your eyes to it.

P.S.  I don't think they did it either. 

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 07:14 am Title: Chapter 5

Nooooooooooooooo! I don't believe you. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: In tribute to Ricardo Montalban:  Khaaaaaaaaaaaan!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2009 07:10 am Title: Chapter 5

You went there.  Pam.  Alex.  Bed.  Groping.  Wert, I don't know what to say.  I was very nearly squirming as I read this.  I don't want to like this, yet I do.  I really like it.  In fact, it's under my skin.  You've very nearly recreated the Pam-Jim show with Alex as the mid-season replacement.  One assumes in watching TO that things didn't work out with Roy and Pam because, ultimately, Jim was more her "type."  Here we have Alex, who is physically more like Roy, quite the opposite of Jim.  I'll stop now.  My head is about to explode.  Give me more, stat.

Wait.  I lied.  I would be remiss if I didn't mention that this is awesome:  It's like all the transients pass through here on their way down the big hole.  The mine or the quarry or whatever it is.  Whatever it is, it's society's toilet, as far as she can tell.  Ha!



Author's Response:

Of course I went there.  I'm me.  It's what I do.  I go out of my way to make fangirls cry. But I do recommend wrapping your head in gauze prior to reading any more of this.  For your own safety.

I liked that society's toilet line too.

I hope I'll be able to give you more, stat.  The next segment isn't as fully developed as I've usually had subsequent sections prior to posting.  I'll try to get it up on the weekend, but I'm going to be away for Sunday and Monday, so if I miss my cutoff, it could be Tuesday. 

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