9 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2009 07:56 am Title: Chapter 8
Wert, your attention to detail is amazing. You are the master of squirm. Despite my discomfort, I was riveted. AND you managed to capture Alex, a character who was barely on the show. I could envision that whole scene. I have no idea where you're going with this, but I am hooked. And, btw, I choose to believe that I did, in fact, make you update. So there. Oh, and, I will continue to bitch if it is warranted ; )
Author's Response:
Only one chapter left, and I am torn between two ways that I want to take it which are very similar but end up in two vastly different places (figuratively - the location is still the same).
It's hard to write someone who starts, stops, and restarts so much in his talking, which is odd since I used to do the same thing when I was younger. I wouldn't have noticed he talked like that though, except that I painstakingly transcribed a scene earlier, and he was stuttering up a storm.